I rewwies wikes this, buts I'm-a wittwe confused as to why this is under angst. Ands remembers, don'ts apologizies fors somethings yous enjoyed!

Loved it! I also love the Fullmetal Alchemist references (o)

Wow, this is really good. I like how you placed some of the other characters here, in addition to Hao and Yoh

great story

It was a bit long for one shot but it was still bery good! I liked it much!

I want to know how Anna killed the poor guy ._. XD Scarf suffocating, her famous slap, a knee a couple of time in the exact good place, crushing his neck under her foot... IWANTTOKNOW O

Loved it btw 3

aww that's cute! who the heck's the blonde guy? I know only two and that's Faust and Marco.

yummy thank you for the yummy story XD

Yo! (waves)

Ohh! Poor Yoh but sooooooooooo cool.

The ending was a little...em...quick, but the story was really good so I don't care one bit.

I can so picture Hao as a rich kid XD. The flash cars and pretty woman XD though maybe Hao would insist on short haired woman, in case they overshadowed his own beautiful locks.

Eto... you've doubled over two paragraphs half through. It's the bit with the taxi driver and Hao entering the club.

You mentioned this was the unedited version though, so it doesn't really matter right now.

Great fic.

Hope I hear more from you soon.

Tata for now

I would have liked it if the smexy part would have been more detailed, but never the less, I loved it ;)

good job!

its not over right? It was a great chapter and I hope there is more. Update soon.

*gasp* so... fantastic! moaaar! plzzzz! D

*Eyes glittering*

Thank you! This. Is. AMAZING!

So cuteeeeeee! .