Aw. I love the way you write Edward. This line was my favorite: "I like taking care of you," he admitted, "It makes me feel useful." So reminiscent of canon.

Thank you.

is there any chance of a second chapter to this? You know, to see where this is going?

Did he mean it when he said he loved her or was it it a truth layered with a joke because of her reaction?

Gah, going crazy here!

You're writing is great by the way.

I totally forgot to review this when I read it, but I loved it. I also love and hate that you left it so open at the end haha. I wouldn't mind another chapter or two to see where they're going, hint hint. But it definitely works as a one-shot as well. Thanks!

Love the story! Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!

Excellent history!Do I end there? Or is going to see more?Thanks for sharing...

I like that you left this open ended. Very cute.

are you really gonna end it there?

i want to know what happens! have you thought about turning this into a story or even just a two-shot so they can get together? either way that was really good :)

(cue ahh-ing here) Did you just leave it at that? Um,no offense,but do they really get together or not in the end? Just curious :)

is it really the end?

noooooo...!

please write more of this! i love edward and bella best friend stories! and your writing is so good and their banter is epic! :)

it's a nice story

a question though

did edward mean what he said ir was just joking you know about liking bella more than a freind

'Cute' story! ;3

So are gonna like continue it here or just leave us hanging? because if you leave us hanging, I will personally find you and throw you overboard on my pirate ship! Love it, please continue!:D

Did you say this was a one-shot? It definitely has great possiblities.

Very interesting.

This is really cute, will have to check out your other stories. Thanks for sharing

...you ended it there?

lol I loved it. They we're so cute.