wow...that...was...a yaoi? Not that it makes a diffrence
I love your writing style.

Was not expecting that! I don't read very many sex fics so I don't know how I can help you with that. It was rather unexpected but you wrote it well!

I love Ruko and Rook and there just HAS to be more fics about them. Thank you for writing this and you got Ruko's insecurity about her gender perfectly. She is NOT a tranny, she is special and one of my favourite loids.

I give it an 8/10. The other two points in because I think you delved into the sex a *little* too quickly but other than that it was great.

Did... did I just read a yoai?

Wow, Ruko being the dominate one with Rook. LOL

Hurrr.

RukoxRook. ;u;

Seriously now.

You need to put up way more stories.

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Wow, April! That was amazing! You can really write!

wow, i'll admit that was the first time i read anything like that, first vocaloid story for that as well. that was really good! I dont know who Rook is but i THINK i know who Ruko is ; but i still read it like i said i would! and it was very much worth the read! thanks for linking it to me! 3

...wow. April that was utterly amazing. It all made me want to smile thanks for that. Told you I'd read it.