Merlin's teeth this is dreadful! There are words in this that are used entirely wrongly... and are you shipping Minervadore? ewwww!

I'm really enjoying this story. Your a really good writer and i love the story so much i can't stop reading it!

Please update

I'm sorry to read that. But by now I know it's a long time in the past. I don't know what's going on with you right now but I hope you can get back to your writing. I truly enjoyed this even though there were some errors. Mainly words left out of some sentences. Just as a suggestion, try rereading each chapter to yourself as you look over what you've written. You'll be surprised how many simple errors you'll find that way. Thanks for what you've already posted for this story.

Normally I don't review anything over five years but I thought I'd post one for this. I don't find it hard to believe that four of the Weasley family turned on Harry. I totally expect it of MoooRon. After all, how many times has he turned on Harry in their seven years at Hogwarts? Now as I don't know if the Horcrux Hunt happened in this story I won't count his abandoning Harry and Hermione during it. But he's an extremely greedy person. There is an angle to redeem Arthur in this story if you want to go that route. Molly's known for making potions for her own gain. Thus you could always have Arthur be taken to St. Mungos to be checked for love, loyalty and any number of other potions. Just a thought. As for Ginny, I lay that strictly at the feet of Fumblemort. If he'd paid for a Mind Healer for her right after the Chamber of Secrets it's likely she wouldn't be like she is now. But Molly, she's beyond any hope of redemption. Though I have read stories where the entire Weasley clan was out to rob Harry in conjunction with Fumblemort.

I hope you are doing well after the Tornado..

The grammar is...atrocious and that one scene with Hermione was very melodramatic. That aside, I like the concept and I am honestly willing to overlook that. The story has potential~

Love it

I like it a lot. I just have two more questions. Isn't it Pansy Parkinson not Perkinson? Also, will you be writing more?

I like it! The only thing is, I don't think Harry would say hey girl to Hedwig. It just doesn't seem right

Just love it

Plz continue

Please please can you give us an update it’s been so long

Please, I beg you, Continue

i love this story