Just finished the original story and had to jump straight to this one. Must say, it surpassed even my expectations. :)

I loved how he tried so hard not to tell her and Jennifer saw through his attempts to mask it anyway. And "Yeah, that.." afterwards was so totally Rodney! I probably shouldn't have found it so cute. Bordering between smoldering and entertaining, mostly the former, I absolutely adore this fic.

Excellent and great last chapter! I really *liked* it. LOL

I'd love to read more of your stories. No matter how long or short they might be. 'Cause this was a lovely journey, I'd take anytime again.

Congrats and lots of stars!

Thanks for finishing this. It was well worth the wait. (Now I need to go back and review the other chapters.)

Hot as hell and sweet as heaven, Des. Thanks for the adventure.

Des-

Oh, where to begin with this piece of hotness!

The descriptions (the act itself), the humor (wrong size?), the tender moments (Rodney holding back to make it all about her) and the fluff (I love you's!)

Just perfection.

The torch is passed. I've made it public and can retire in peace. McKeller has a wonderful new author and I'm proud to be able to help you launch this perfect, hot evening for our favorite couple.

RoryFaller (signing off)

Yay! For update! _

Liked that little bit of how the engineer in Rodney loved Jennifer's hands and finger nails...nice touch.

Rodney's declaration of love to Jennifer and then calling her baby...*sigh* loved that! And then Rodney smiling like a loon when Jennifer said the words back to him!

Wrong size condoms..."surpassed a lot of expectations"...lucky girl!

Looking forward to your next story!

First, thank you for the story. I appreciate the reminder of the Help Desk story. (nice plug)

Now on to your first smut story. Excellent! You have a real gift for capturing 'the act' in a real manner. I feel like this could be a slice of life for any couple.

You know me well to add the line about "taking care of his girlfriend'. (big grin)

You surpassed a lot of expectations. (doesn't McKay always do that!)

As for the size thing, anyone who saw A Dog's Breakfast should tell you what size she got that was wrong (Sorry Hewlett!)

Thanks you once again and get to work on my next present!

DW

Quite a great chapter! Fun and hot! LOL

Congrats! I really liked reading it.

PS You're welcome. It's easy (most of the time) to review a story that is a joy to read.

I love the subtle touches like Rodney comparing his first taste of Jennifer to wine and her surprised reaction to tasting herself on his lips. Wonderful.

Oh my! *fans self*

I would enjoy one of rodney's tongue-lashings! :D

"Her thighs snapped shut, trapping his head in between"...oh yeah!

"because while others have had my body, none have had my heart."...loved that line! *sigh*

So totally agree...sex and laughter do go hand in hand! Well done with another excellent chapter! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Don't blame me for your over-embellishment!

As always, the word selection, imagery and general 'hotness' of the chapter is top notch.

You already know my favorite line, but I'll let the world know... "I'll make you forget those other men, Jennifer." (McKay arrogance at the highest level!)

The scene with the attempt at fellatio is hilarious and fitting of the Jennifer you've developed in this chapter and pulled along from Dani's original.

Cannot wait for the finale and see if Rodney, now that Jennifer started to admit the depth of her feelings, can hold off dropping the 'I love you' when he hits his happy place.

Great writing and addition to the story!

RF

I don't know about an apology being necessary. That was nice, kinda funny. Thanks for returning to this story. I signed up for an account just so I could PM you and bug you about it (not really). This is really hot, and you haven't even gotten to the sex yet. Wow!

I can't decide what I like more, the sweet stuff or the steamy stuff. Keep writing and don't wait so long to post the next update. Please.

This was such a sweet and 'playful' chapter. Totally loved it.

Oooh, I cannot wait for the next one! ;)

Congrats and as always lots of stars for a fantastic mind!

Update...Finally! _

"God, Rodney, you're so...""Just be gentle with me, okay?"...

WOW! Rodney is..um...nicely endowed! :D

Loved how Rodney answered Jennifer's statement that she never acted that way before...it was perfect! Loved it! And Rodney flipping Jennifer over..wow..so MANLY!

Enjoyed...really enjoyed the sex scenes! Jennifer's advances and Rodney wanted to do something different...HOT! Nicely done!

Looking forward to the next chapter! Also, looking forward to reading any other stories you have brewing up in your mind!

Hope RL issues get resolved to your wishes! _