Well done! I bet Elizabeth Sladen would have loved this story.
It was well written & has a good balance of Timey Whimey Wibbly Wobbly, Angst & friendship that surpasses space & time.

great story so far but I am having a hard time believing that amy would not have gone with the doctor and even if she didn't go with him I would think that she would be there when he got back asking questions about what is going on.

Other than that good story so far.

Great story, I loved the plot, but two things - 1)PUNCTUATION! that would make it soooooooooooooooooooo much easier to read!and 2)why would Luke give her his real name? Then Sarah Jane would know "The Archetype" as Luke in her future, and she didn't have a clue who he was or what to call him. But it is still a really great idea, and a well-told story. I think you captured the doctor really well.

This was a very interesting story and I enjoyed it a lot! Thanks for writing!

Packrat17

That was really really good. I just have to tell you to be careful about spellings, for example you sometimes put past tense words in instead of present, or put random spaces in words?

But that aside it was really really REALLY good!

Well gwd i am so into tis story n it so deserves a few more chapters

Well gwd n it so deserves a few more chapters...x!

Well gwd i am so into tis story n it so deserves a few more chapters babes...x!

Well gwd n it so deserves a few more chapters babes n i am so into tis story line...x!