A very good story here so far!

Great job keep it up. Wow I can't wait to see what happens next update soon

Some people are so going to get there behind handed to them. Update soon

I always like Luna character, she made a bad day seem bright and cheerful. Update soon

Great job keep it up. Dumbledore noticed that Peter was the secret keeper not Harry's godfather. Wow i would love to see where you are taking this story. Update soon

According to the official Harry potter website hadgrid was a Gryffindor not a Hufflepuff.

Perhaps Hermione animiagus form is a cat and that along with car hair in Polyjuice caused this.

More procrastination. It is beyond agrevating having the characters constantly putting things off till later. Why not take care of it then? Most of the time there isn’t a good reason to put it off and plenty reasons to take care of issues when they pop up.

That’s the second or third time you have put off explaining or exploring the potions. This isn’t predictable at all. Something that should have been looked at immediately perhaps. Another author who has their characters act stupid and/or procrastinate critically important actions to increase drama. Hopefully this is not the case.

FOR THE SAKE OF ALL THINGS HOLY,UPDATE!

you seem to have split chapter 10 in two and posted them as chapters 11 & 12, you might want to fix that by removing either chapter 10 or chapters 11 & 12.

Chapter 11 is a near duplicate of chapter 10, you might want to fix that.

So you know chapters 11 and 12 appear to be duplicates of 9 and 10.

chapters 11 and 12 are just chapter 10 split in half you should fix this

I really hope this will be continued at some point its really good!