More, More, More, More I Loveeeee it please update ] you can't just leave it there :O

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Omgg PLEASE update! You can't leave this story like this! I will quote you here...

"A/N: Ooh, lovely… I can have fun with this one! Please review, I'm sorry this has been so long but I've been distracted. Sorry again! It won't happen again! *slaps cheek* Hope you enjoyed it, thanks for reading! Jazzola :)"

Ha, Anyways, I hope all is well and that you be able to update soon. This is seriously the best story I have found under the fred/Daphne catagory. It's been super difficult finding good ones. But yours is amazingg, So pleasee Update this. I'd be super happy. (:

im not goth i jus like dese sort of things) it wud b rlly awesome if she got shot but barely survived yea yea yea! *devilish smirk* i only belive in happy endings if theres a lot of blood involved hehe. oh in case u 4got im not goth or emo i just like dese sort of things :)

Hey this story is really cool can't wait for the next chapter!

this was a great story please finish it up because you are 1 of the best writers on this blog you have a great story correct grammar and spelling and you describe everything so well (i know i sound like such a geek) keep up the wonderful work

Too bad about Fred & Daph if they might die. Hope you update the story. I'm sure your readers what you to update like me. I know you're busy with other stories.

Oh my gosh! You gave me chills the whole way through! This is great. I love it love it love it! I think my heart just about stopped beating when it ended. Keep it up! :)

Funny about Fred & Daph pretending to play dead! LOL

Wow. Hope Fred and Daph get out of the coma soon!

Great story line here as always, Jazzy. I liked ch.3 as well. Too bad Vel and Shag were busy worrying about Freddy and Daph even though they're still alive and well.

How sad! I feel bad for Fred and Daph at the end of this chapter when they had to go into the coma, but this is getting to be a good story. I had no clue there was another Ohio, but it's on my state list I've never been before like New York. Very interesting!

Great story. I'll read more of this later. I like Fred and Daph in this story. Are you going to update this anytime soon? I know you're working on a new story right now, though. Keep up the great story lines!

Dont slap your self!

It dosn't matter how long it takes you to update because you always make up for it with a brilliant chapter.

Just between you and me what happened with the gunshot?

I know what you're going to say 'you are going to have to read the next chapter to find out' talk about keeping a idiot in suspence! 'you're not a idiot' see i know what you're thinking im to smart for you i am Laura D the Phycic! MWHAHAHAHA

Oh great im losing my mind. altough yu cant lose something you never hade LOL anywy story

This was amazing and i cant wait for the next chapter

keep writing you're a true autor

Angel1008 xxx :)

aaaaah! CLIFFHANGER! hurry, hurry, im a huge fan!

This is my favourite story that you have written. That probs dont mean much but it really is! LOL, Well done xoxo