Hn. Takuya was annoying. Frankly, I forgot what I did to help him when I played though. He just came in one day and was happy. :/

Whatever, anyways, I just wish more people would take your initiative. I love stories like these! Thankfully, the only one who has has done it well. :D I hope you continue, though i realize how annoying it is to just type what's written. XD

Anyways, awesome story! If Lux Pain were more popular (as it should be) this would get a ton more reviews.

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I so get you!

I love how this story is going so far. The interaction with Atsuki is believable and I can't wait to see how the plot alters with the self-insert.

I'm really liking this so far! I'm very interested to see how you being there will affect the plot of the game, and what will even happen in general. Keep up the good work!