This was great, is there a part two?

I loved the story! The only issue I have is the some words are spelled wrong and some sentences are missing words. But other than that I thought the story was great, even hoping for a continuation after all Inuyasha is 'plotting.'

come on you can't leave me hanging like that what is he plotting please tell me

ok,ive reveiwed your story other times under the names:sydney and im ladyfluffy with an acount!so plz give me credit 4 the reviews!

Love the story, Hope you'll update ASAP!

LORDFLUFFY IS IN THE HOUSE!i've read this too many times!

LORDFLUFFY IS OUT!

Your fic is awesome I love this pairing" Keep up the good work..LOL" Thanks for a graet fic

LORDFLUFFY IS IN THE HOUSE!*yawns*its like 3:54 in the morning and i just nottied somthing KAGOME CAN CHANGE THE COLOR OF HER EYES!like,like,ive seen'em brown and seeu'em blue its like*yawns*friken scarey!ohh and i like your fic its ummm...lets say short and to my likeing!naw,naw,i dont mean like that,like a sesshy/kags oneshot!its 4:00 A.M. IN CABOT ARKANSAS YAY BABY IM HYPER ON THE INSIDE BUT ON THE OUTSIDE IM JUST FINE!WELL BYE GOTS TO GO(not really im just tried)so...

LORD FLUFFLY HAS LEFT THE BULIDING! it look like a dog if you have... imaganation!see anit it cut i can only get the infintey sign cuz im on my dsi useing the internet.

NOW LORDFLUFFY OF THE WESTERN LANDS HAS LEFT THE BUILDING!-lordfluffy of the west is out dowgs!

good job!no no no really super ulrta great job!whynis it a one shot?if and when my dad sets up the internet and i get an acount can i take over the story cuz it says compleate on top but to me thats a cliffy!so you should write more to it!lol and i love how inuyasha is*ploting*to get her please just for me could ya' wrtie more then a one-shot

your friend-

sydney schultz

Please tell me there's a sequel to this!

I would have done this with my pen name but it's not letting me login right now... :(

I didn't even attempt to read your story because of the myriad of errors present. Please carefully edit your compositions before posting them on this site. There is nothing worse than reading a story and being distracted by grammatical errors.

u should make a sequel! it was cool!

good, but i highly suggest getting yourself a beta reader to smooth it out and turn 'good' into 'great', or 'excellant'.

Very nice, I enjoyed reading this story immensely.

very nice story but its not 'yukies' its youkais and alfa is Alpha ok and agian VERY NICE STORY!