It comes when the sequel ?

When's the next update?! This is such a good read!

Great story. Hope you update soon.
Can't wait to read more.
Is Allen going to meet Agatha?

brilliant writing please continue when able also do you have an Ao3 account.

I love your beautiful story. It was so unique with the Earl being married to Neah instead of brothers. The fact even that Allen hide he was a girl this whole time. I especially love Neah and Allen interacting in the mirror dimension. I hope you are able to update this wonderful story.

Thank you so much for writing and posting this story! This is undeniably amazing. This is not only the best female Allen story I have ever had the pleasure of reading, but also one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. You actually wrote this character as Allen, not as some useless girly Mary Sue, and I cannot thank you enough for that. Unlike most of the other female Allen stories I have read, this one has a legitimate (and incredible!) plot. Quite possibly the best plot I have ever found in a -Man story. Every time I thought your plot could not possibly become more amazing, you proved me wrong with more of your literary brilliance. Your characters are all in-character (which is rather surprising, and impressive, given the nature of these types of stories) and you have done a wonderful job of constructing believable original characters. Even though they are in-character, you actually managed to make Kanda slightly more likable (I was never very fond of his character before the more recent arcs in the manga) and that is quite impressive. You have added so much believable character development for so many characters, it is simply incredible. I also love how you have written the interactions between the characters; Lenalee and Lavi are adorable (without being obnoxious), and the sibling relationship between Allen and Lavi is simply precious. All of the interactions including Neah are quite fascinating. I also think you have done an excellent job of portraying the complex relationship between Kanda and Allen, and I am truly enjoying the slow (and believable) progression of their relationship. I like how you wrote a story with romance, but didn’t make it the main focus. The subtlety of it is more true to the original work. Though I like how well you have followed some of the ideas set by the manga, I absolutely love how original some of your ideas are. Your version of Lavi’s Innocence is both amusing and utterly fascinating (I am quite looking forward to more information on his new ‘rabbit hole’ traveling abilities). I also adore your portrayal of Neah (you also did a fantastic job of making her utterly terrifying at times). I am particularly fond of your ideas of the Noah family, and how they are not truly evil and can be saved (I always hoped Hoshino would do something like this. I agree with Allen; they are human, and the exorcists do not exist to kill humans.). I was also quite thrilled that you have added more to Allen’s past without making her ‘family’ unrealistic. Your attention to detail and historical accuracy in this story is phenomenal. I have actually been reading this story for several years, but due to some issues with the system this is the first time I have been able to leave a review (I was very excited to see the revisions on the early chapters, you did an excellent job). I realize you have not updated in quite some time, but I still have hope that you will one day, if you want to. You are an incredible writer; your writing style is beautiful and your story in stunningly original and creative. You are amazing, never forget that. Whatever you may be doing with your life now, I hope that you are well. I thank you again for sharing such a fantastic story on this site, and I wish you the best in all that you do.

It's too bad that you dropped this story, because it is fantastic. The plot, the characters... Everything is perfect. I honestly think that it is one of the best fanfic in this fandom. I would have loved to read it until the end because you seemed to have lots of interesting ideas.

good story so far

good story so far

Wow. That is amazing story. At first I was sceptical, but it turned out really great. Hope you would continue it. It would be sad, should this story come to waste.

. . . I really wanna smack Marcus upside the head

oh man no matter how many times I read this chapter I will never stop laughing about Lavi's new Innocence! LMFAO!

this is my third time reading this and I'm just now catching the HxH reference! love it! lol. Kanda really is like an angry fox-bear!

Please update this story soon

hope to get some more on this story! . . . . . . . this has to be one of the BEST DGM AU fanfics I've read so far! the details you put in are really amazing and very accurate. the original DGM characters are spot on and your OCs almost completely blend into the storyline so much that I forget that they are OCs in the first place.
plus I just have to commend you on keeping Allen as Allen while still changing his gender completely. you tweaked his background just enough to where it fits the plot you've created but is still the same in essence.