Reviews for Deidara's Story Part 1 and 2
TheRamenLord chapter 4 . 12/1/2012
tobi is obito. chapter 601. good story.
kaesin-chan1997 chapter 5 . 5/10/2010
This story was quite sweet and funny it had me smiling the entire time.

some helpful advice, Deidara is a little ooc, you nailed Tobi perfectly though. Another thing is your writing style (it reminds me of me) which annoys me a bit since I don't like the way I write, but don't worry, as I'm learning this will only come in time (all writers start out sounding...well a little off)

In the meanwhile keep writing! you have talent!