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Dark Lord Ganondorf chapter 11 . 5/31/2013 Great chapter, but I do have one thing to say about it. I don't like your version of Yamamoto. He's just as bad as Mayuri! Kill this, kill that, terminate the pregnancy this, terminate the pregnancy that. It's wrong! You shouldn't kill off one child simply because it could pose a threat that may not even be that much of a big deal! Children should be allowed to live,not be killed before they are even born. It's cruel! It's inhumane! Seriously, you need to change Yamamoto's character. And why make him side with Aizen? It doesn't make sense! Rant over. |
Dark Lord Ganondorf chapter 8 . 5/30/2013 Great chapter. Can't wait to see more, but I did notice one little mistake near the end of it. You spelled haemophobic wrong. You spelt it 'hemi-phobic' when really, its spelt '. |
Guest chapter 15 . 2/10/2013 Cool story. :) |
HetaliaMonster chapter 15 . 10/30/2011 This is actually pretty good, only one thing is bugging me though! XD Ulquiorra is soooo OOC... He wouldn't swear, he wouldn't snap, he wouldn't blush no matter what! XD He is an un-emotional, sexy, goth batman that is so damn hot that I read lemons about him! XD (You didn't hear that!) UchihaMonster |
gorguts5 chapter 15 . 5/6/2011 why was grimmy beaten up by a fraccion? |
I-sold-my-soul-for-a-cookie chapter 10 . 3/27/2011 "Well I ain't some third ranked hollow! I do enjoy me some waffles!" He assured the man. "Oh and Chad's human you gotta feed those things you know. Or else they get all shriveled and start whining and then they stop moving or making noise at all and Aizen says you have to bury them." LMAO! I love this :) |
HerFairy chapter 15 . 9/24/2010 great story! Even though the site was being weird and I had to stop, shut down, refresh and all that type of things before it let me few some chapters. I started reading this morning and I would have been finished by this afternoon had the site not gone all 'error in your request' on me! I feel bad for Orihime, Tia, Rangiku and the others that may be pregnant; preggars in a war, poor people! I hope they win and how cool would it be to kill three birds with one stone! Stone 1: Aizen/ kill him Stone 2: Soul Society/ kill them unless they surrender Stone 3: get the babies out and hope they don't kill their mothers...oh and destroy the world, did I forget to mention that? yeah it's pretty important to me. Update soon please D -Somerlia |
RawrHarHar chapter 1 . 8/15/2010 I love it~! |
Onlynameleft chapter 15 . 8/13/2010 Yay! Thanks for the update. I'm really glad you detailed the Ulqiorra vs. Yammy fight. That was awesome! :) |
fantsygirlgowild113 chapter 15 . 8/13/2010 Really good can't wait until the next battle |
SapphireNova24 chapter 15 . 8/11/2010 i cant wait please keep it up |
ReginaCaelum chapter 15 . 8/10/2010 AWWWW, cute! Although I'm thinking that Ulquiorra might do a little better against Yammi than you're thinking, since no one knows about his Segunda Etapa. But that's just my thoughts. Anyway, great chapter! |
Onlynameleft chapter 14 . 8/9/2010 Update soon please. Me likey |
Onlynameleft chapter 9 . 8/9/2010 This is the most awesome chapter yet. I nearly busted a gut. Keep it up, please. |
Onlynameleft chapter 7 . 8/9/2010 I like how you portayed Yumichika here. Good job. |