Loved this

Aww poor hermione

Excellent

Thanks for sharing this story, though I really can't imagine Hermione being content to just stay at home and host social events and be the 'perfect pureblood wife' - she seems more likely to be the independent has-her-own-job (but still caring and loving towards her children and husband) kind of wife... also I cringe whenever Hermione's name gets shortened - whether it's Mione, or in this case, Mia; but then I guess everyone has their own interpretations of character...

This was so sweet! :')

Aw. This is a cute fic between them. I love how happy they are at the end!

I liked the idea, but your Hermione was way too OOC for me. I honestly cannot picture her being satisfied staying at home and being a "good wife".

I'm a bit of a feminist, so I suppose that's why I couldn't really get into it.

Nice writing, but I think you'd be more effective if you focused more on showing and not telling. Way too much narrative at the beginning - dialogue should speak for itself.

I would have liked to have seen more of the battles of wits that you refer to at the beginning, instead of the more comfortable - and frankly, probably more boring - relationship they have now.

This is really well done! You're a wonderful writer!

why it is in M rated?

UGH. you are too brilliant for your own good. i am in awe of you. write more so i can flipping review more. (: great job.

So sweet:)

I can only say WOW.

The story is very well written. While reading, I have the feeling to be there. The story is written very visually. I have an feeling, like I have been there in an intimate moment.

If I may give you a tip, between past and present, you should distinguish it somehow. It's confusing when everything is written in a Block. Therefore, it is helpful would it be a clear separation.

Otherwise, your story is great. I'm looking forward to more works from you.

thank you

Mai

I totally enjoyed reading this.

Great job!

I love this. :]

Brilliantly written and the character organization is so rich and honest. This is the first fic, I've read and reviewed.

The conversation between Hermione and Draco is beautiful. It can tell alot of their story without even having to go into detail. The air is between them and you feel the heavy heart and the butterflies in her stomach.

Such a wonderfull job. I really enjoyed this.

I loved it, I love it when people write nice draco.

good job,

Stefy101