It was funny.

Good job showing that Kikumaru Sousuke isn't as great as he boasts himself to be! So at the end, he suspects that aliens poisoned his little brother. I wonder how the rest of the family would react.

It's true that Sousuke could have just asked Eiji what happened. Then again, I know people who make a mess of things trying to find answers when all they had to do was ask.

I did figure out that it was most likely Inui Juice, and when Michiko mentioned "Fuji," I figured she probably meant Yumiko instead of Syusuke.

It seems like Syusuke was trying to play a joke on Sousuke by mentioning suspects in the family. Then again, maybe he was talking about their siblings dating.

Twos words: Quite. Epic.

That was just plain amusing the whole way. I love Sousuke, he's quite the character. When Michiko said "Kogure is dating Fuji." I didn't even think about Yumiko; my mind when straight to Syusuke, hehe.

I had a feeling it was Inui juice, but wasn't sure. A good combination of humor and mystery, I must say. I would love to read more of those fics, hm... I know how I'm spending my day, hehe!

I'll have to go look at your other fics, when I get a chance. I have a list of authors to go through, but being me, I'm going through them alphabetically! But that's not the point. I must say I do love "To Dream of Nationals". Very good story, I should work on wring my own good tennis scenes. I'm going to go finish reading that soon, and reviewing! Yay!

Anyways, enough rambling! Great job on the fic, you are like an idol in this fandom. I hope to see more stories from you soon!

PS. Stalking NXYZ Forum Finding good stories.

Too lazy to log in. Hilarious, I love it. I'm talking to you. I actually loled. woo. Umm, I dunno what to say. Still laughing. hee hee.

Byeeeee~

Oh Froggy, This is so EPIC XD

Sosuke FTW! D

ALIENS FTW! 8D

This is going under the *fav* list

(I *heart* Sosuke! But I love you MOAR FROGGY! *hugs*)

You. You awesome. I would glomp you if I was a glompy person, you realize?

The Kikumaru siblings are 'paiwenbgv'[o;u\ (yes, you get keysmash. I've been talking to Meru and Doro for too long). They're all so eccentric in their own way. XD You certainly had your fun with Michiko and Sousuke.

And Sousuke (you lovable, idiotic dork), I agree with you. Detective Conan is epic manga. *nods*

-"First rule of solving mysteries: the simple explanation is always set up deliberately to cast suspicion on someone else. Who made the Inui Juice?"

The guy with the extremely thick glasses raised his hand. "That would be me."

"I am sure you are an innocent man," Sousuke proclaimed solemnly.

Pft. Of course, Sousuke, of course.

There's a lot more I could quote from this to laugh at (apart from the aliens. XD, when you've ruled out everything else, whatever remains...), but then, this review would go on forever...

So I'll just sit back and reread the story. ~

And yes, I do like this fic. *nods*

Eiji's brother is totally a freak otaku. Lolz

Sousuke really likes to complicate things And Fuji, a demon? XDDD AND THEN ALIENS XDDDD

(Lol Eureka! That's what Edgeworth says so much. But he's not in this fandom so. ;)

Uh Kogure better be hot. I'm under the assumption that he MUST be for him to date Yumiko :P

Omg. XDD

All I can say about this fic was that it was hilarious. Absolutely hilarious. I love how neurotic the OCs are, especially Sousuke. The little quirks you gave to all of them make Eiji seem downright normal in comparison. It's a wonder that he turned out with any sort of normalcy at all.

Is it strange for me to wish for more misadventures of the Kikumaru family (even knowing that this is just a oneshot. Which is a shame. You've got a real talent for blunt, dry humor XD)?

Welcome back, sir. [salutes] It's been awhile, and it's nice to read your writing again. Clever title, even though I haven't actually watched the movie. :)

LOL! I see you haven't lost your magic in creating interesting OCs. :D Michiko should hang out with Fuji (Syuusuke); their strikingly similar personalities have given me reason to think that they are twins separated at birth. Yes...

Oh yeah, I've been meaning to ask you this for some time. Are "To Dream of Nationals" and "Prince of Ponta" on hiatus or are they being discontinued?

FROGGY skldjfsklda YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU.

-The lights in the house were on, and twenty-year-old Sousuke – now a fully fledged adult in Japanese society – was reading Detective Conan.

...I love Detective Conan.

-He did remember having to do baseball and sucking royally at it.

KAJFKLAS XDDD The sports gene does not run in the family, I'm assuming? XD

-"Does tennis poison your insides?" Sousuke asked while noting how very pale Eiji's face was. He knew from reading murder mystery novels when people were suffering from the effects of poison.

LOOOOOOL

-"Eiji was poisoned," Sousuke announced, speaking directly to Oishi in a sonorous voice. "He was poisoned by a vile substance yesterday which he appears to have digested through swallowing!"

I-I want an awesome dramatic brother like Sousuke. XDDD Then I would find great amusement in teasing him XD

-"It does," Michiko said. "Kogure is dating Fuji."

Sousuke promptly passed out.

...Poor boy XDD

-He opened his eyes upon hearing Eiji's voice. He blinked. Then he noticed Fuji.

"Aaaaargh, stay away from me, demon!"

...Did I mention that I loved Sousuke? XDDD

-"I'm a terrible detective," Sousuke said tearfully.

...You are, dear. -pats- It's okay.

-"Aliens!" he exclaimed. "There can be no other solution. I've dismissed everything else, so my theory must be correct. Eureka!"

..JUST LOL XDDD