“Something that will hurt him? Doesn't she know, or even care how I feel right now?” I was thinking to myself “Severus, there are people dying” like from the Kardashians. Lol!

as much as I love Sasha, I'm starting to hate Severus more and more. Can't men in this story think about other things?

I'm starting to hate the personality of your OC sasha... she has literally no brains and weak!

why is sasha so weak? up till now she didn't even get to use her wand...

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Man. Very sad poor Igor. I hope you've written a romance story for him!

Ah ha! My suspicion was correct in why Severus acted the way he did or rather isblack of action! Interesting idea. Glad to see them open up more but she needs to tell the truth of her love for him!

Wow can't believe Severus stood by and didn't try to help her. He must've been berybout of it but still what a coward!

Don't like Igor much since it seems even tho he knows her love for Severus, he's going to keep on trying to get her in bed! Not cool

So hoping they hold kiss during their dance!

So cute! I love the idea of a Pegasus ride over the lake. If only that were real life!

Haha what an awful spy if he can't even hear them! Haha

Ahaha jealous much? Can't believe that it's Barty crouch jr talking to her and she doesn't even know! I wonder what he'd do to her since he knows she doesn't love him!

Loved this story! Thank you so much for writing it! Wish there was more!

Sorry but she can't be Lucius sister and siruis cousin. This is bcos Lucius is married to siruis cousin. So that would mean that sasha is related to both Lucius and his wife.