please update this

it is amazing

Dude or dudette I like this story a lot it's very well written it has kept me interested through a whole day of chemo I especially liked how you kept Naruto acting like Naruto even with this new power if the show Naruto or the anime Naruto got this power I imagine him acting the same way as you have him here so very good job now keeping all that in mind I do have one little critique that you may address in further chapters I don't know but here I go wouldn't Makoto know that Naruto is Kushina has son with his love of ramen his catch phrases how old he is his last name anyway I don't know if anybody else has brought that up but There He Go also question for future chapters are you still going to do the whole Orochimaru Ark and will Naruto have the ability to control or bind the spirits of the impure World Resurrection technique cuz that would be really cool if could you imagine the two Elder hokage's just pop out of the coffins Orochimaru Powers them up then Naruto somehow pops up maybe through one of Haku ice mirrors and with a single look he frees the Trap Souls of the hokage's and they just turned Orochimaru like you are so dead cuz I'm fairly sure this would rule out the whole sarutobi using the reaper death seal to take their souls okay that was all I had to say I know it's a rather long review and I get if you don't read it but I wanted to tell you my opinion so keep up the good writing I hope to read more well technically I listen to it cuz I get the stories on the text-to-speech reader I can't really hold the phone anymore again fantastic story

Naruto gets a bloodline and it becomes about everyone but him... I just don't see the logic of his first spirit not being his family not being someone concerned about him.

So first I read Technological Ninja and I fell in love with it. It was greatly written, had touched on Star Ocean, and was working towards something grand I enjoy with most stories...but then that was stopped.

Bummed, I looked at your profile hoping to see something to show that you're still around and I found THIS gem. Now I haven't played much Phantom Brave but I love what you were doing here...only to find you haven't updated this story EVEN LONGER!

Now...I know this is pot calling the kettle black here, because my own stories have been on years hiatus...but I need my fix. Are you ever going to update? Are you working on a different story just as unique as the two I spoke of? Are you even still writing?

i like the story please continue

Mikoto-san? Since when Naruto is one for the honorifics? He never uses them.

Ch 12 Tic tock Superstitions Death God . 3 now the rest are needed 9 . Very full with tension story until the 9 months . And Orochimaru in Future . What will happen.

Ch 9 . So I guessed close enought . In my coded twisted words and similar for T'lum is SANTEH /SANTEHA / ECASA SANTEHA.

MEANING IN SHADOW , DEEP IN THE SHADOW , DEEP IN THE SHADOW DIMENSION, IN THE DARKNESS DIMENSION . REALLY THE MOST DANGEROUS TRAINING GROUND MAYBE FOR EXTREMELY POWERFUL WARRIORS, DEMONS ,HALF DEMONS ,BIJU,SHENGAMI, LAS NOCHES IN POWER VERSION OR DILUTED A BIT IN POWER.

goodness, this is such an amazing fanfic! please keep writing it! thanks!

This is Awesome! I don't know why you stopped writing it but, I really wish you would continue. It's one of the most interesting, intriguing and original Naruto fanfic plots I've read. And I've read ALOT. Anyway, hoping that you pick it back up soon!

Rubbing my hands together, when is the next chapter coming out

I hope this gets continued.

It's Dan Kato.

Good what next

eh I hope you update this its interesting. would be cool if other worlds got involved somehow.