Reviews for Annabeth's Vision
Alisa chapter 1 . 11/22/2017
SO sad
The Ice Within chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
OMG!

Rick should've totally added that in.

That was so good!

-Icy-

Fave.
TheBroadwayBabyofHufflepuff chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
Cool story! And yes, It's good that that dream didn't come true...
Djunakei898 chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
Your portrayal of Annabeth was flawless. The last line was exactly how she would think!

And you described Percy's death in her arms magnificently.

Bravo!

LF xoxo
Stinkyacorn chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
Ohhhhh, really good :)
silentpenguin chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
YEAH AWESOMEx STORY xD
Clarisse the Wild chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
I really liked it. It was so sad when Percy died. :( He's got seagreen eyes though, not emerald.
DidSomebodySayDracoMalfoy chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
OH wow that was so sad!

Hey no faults your grammar was pretty much perfect! I hate when fanfics have terrible grammar and punctuation and spelling, and you feel like screaming they're so annoying, but not only was the grammar great, so was the story! I reckon you should do annabeths POV in the battle when Percy almost gets stabbed in the back and she saves him!

On ya, and i hope keep writing!