i will continue this story email me ok

If you would give me permission, I'd like to continue this. My name is Skycrawlers123 and you can find me here ( .com)

*Sighs* God dammit, this is not my day. *Put up my hand* I will do it.

would you consider putting it on my challenge forum so we can help you? I'd hate to see this stall out

Doesn't it make more sense for Naruto to become snow rather than lightning. Snow actually looks like Naruto and is the same sex as him.

i have read this story so far three times threw and i just can stop. ienjoy it alot and hope that you will update it soon.

My answer to pairing up lightning is Yuri. For some reason, she did really well on those.

So, do you have a pairing for this? I wander would it become Lightning/NarutoXHinata?

Nice integration of the in-game quotes.

I'm hoping Hope is going to wake up next then Fang and Vanille and lastly poor Sazh XD

Definitely looking forward to who awakens next and what the next move will be by the Elemental Nations. Hope to see Lightning take down more ninjas soon so please update!

Another very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic.

This is an awesome story you are a very good writer,

Good luck with this & any others you may write.

Looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

Peace & Jah Bless

Kaiba1288

the way you're using Paradigm shift could use some explaining, really they're just a change of strategy so there should be nothing stopping Lightning from just casting Esuna, same would go for stuff like TP and CP, doesn't have to be anything ground breaking but some kind of explanation would be nice

other than that, good job

hmm interesting!