This is so sad. Gosh. Alice should have just spoke up. But we all know how it feels to like to someone but not do anything about it.

Awww...that's so sad! :(

Aw. This hurts...prob bc we can all relate somehow..to that one person, who we loved from afar, and never got to touch, to hold, to whisper to in the night...but still, even in the pain of remembrance, love.

awwww... no .. alice :(( i usually like emmett, but since you put him this way.. i hate him. :(

Not the first time I read this but it never stops making me feel so sad. Alice deserves the girl, but I guess it was one of those times that you just had to write something that doesn't end happily. You write so well and beautifully, its incredible.

was lurker-ing around when i saw this and was really touched

it was beautifully written :)

also loving ADMIL

that is so sad! anyway, great story and btw age doesnt matter in love was AMAAAAZZZIIIING!

this was amazing for lack of a better word.

aww, that was mean. though emmett was one of the characters i like most in the movie/book. poor alice...

I really, really like this...I've read it a few times now and it struck me, hard. Very well done.

~Snowy

That's just so melancholy; it was a good read, though. I wanted to slap Emmett on the head or annoyingly nudge Alice to say something.

Aww, this is so sad.. :( But I love it though :D

SO cute and SO effing sad.

i swear, dude, i was wondering how you would ever follow up to your giant monster of a masterpiece ADMIL, but here you've tried something else, and it worked. you've got really creative ideas. :]

Very, very sad..

): Sad Alice is sad. However, it was still wonderfully written and I enjoyed the short little story. Emmett's poem was amusing and although I'm sure it would've been harder, I would have loved to hear what "he" said about everyone else. :D