This has to be my favorite chapter in the entire Path of the Chosen series. It’s a nice change of perspective, being from a Pokémon’s POV. And the fact that Hair and the Pokémon understand each other perfectly, it was quite relaxing. I’d love to see more chapters like this one in the future! Keep up the good work, Ferngirl!

does mean cara will meet ash,misty and brock and will they renesie her after four years

I love this i can't wait to finish it :)

I like your version better than the Movie! What can I say? I love Horses and Horse Pokémon!

That was so amazing

I loved this story as much as rthe first one! I was wondering something from this one and the other. You seem to switch the names a lot, from the nickname to the species name. I was wondering why.

well, thank goodness in the latest movie with Kyurem and Keldeo, the Team Rocket comedy trio only got cameos, since you dislike them ;p

And here is another similarity to Shadow the Hedgehog! after stopping a personal vendetta to destroy the world, Mewtwo goes traveling. with Shadow, after saving the world from the Biohazard, dying, being resurrected, and helping Sonic defeat Metal Sonic, Shadow went traveling before the events of the game Shadow the Hedgehog. Seriously, its like Sonic Team created Shadow after being inspired by Mewtwo.

oh, heck YEAH! Mewtwo! one of my favorites, since he is very much like Shadow the Hedgehog. You know, made from the DNA of a powerful being, has amnesia, knew a little girl before a tragic death, is insanely powerful, and is considered the most powerful being in thier world... whoa. now that i think about it, they really are very similar

Cara really is a lucky person. Who else would be able to make friends with all the legendaries plus have an entire island practically to herself. Great series that you're writing and its been a pleasure reading all this. Now I'm gonna go read the third story. You'll probably hear from me again soon. _

Aw, that was a good ending... if it is the ending. If it is, I'm certainly looking forward to a part three. I really look forward to this story's newest chapters: it was the second Pokemon story I read on here, and I have loved catching up and reading every new chapter along the way. Please continue with this! :D

' "We couldn't hve done it without you." ' Forgot the 'a' in 'have'.

'And you ahven't met Hari either.' Switch the 'h' and the 'a' in 'haven't'.

' "I wonder where ben and Hari are?' Ben needs to be capitalized. :D

'But seeing his old friend would probably make him feel better.' This is just a suggestion, but I would probably just add an 's' to the end of 'friend'...

'He was hanging upside down from a tree bcanch abov me, hence his sudden appearance.' Branch is misspelled, and there's no 'e' in 'above'.

' "Everyon'e waiting, right by the creek," ' Lol, random apostophe in the middle of everyone. XP

This was a good chapter, but short nonetheless. I'd like to see the next part (or story?), but make sure that Cara goes from gym to gym like the first one. That's what I really liked about the first story. Or will you make Cara a Coordinator? And Ben can win Gym Battles? I'm looking forward to what you do, either way. :)

that's great that mewtwo recovered so quickly

Close call for Cara. She's lucky she had Darkrai.

There's a girl in Star Trek, she's Ocampan, and she has psychic abilities. When she was learning to use them, her instructor told her not to think of what to do, but to think of what she wanted to accomplish. For example, when you want to take a drink from a glass of water, you don't think of how to do it, you just reach out and take a sip instinctively. He had her imagine the water in her mouth, wanted her to see herself putting the glass on her lips. Just a little insight for you for Cara's powers. ;D

'Giovanni paused in front of the red bobble that encased the sleeping Mewtwo.' bobble to bubble.

'He paced in a ciarcle around it, nodding silently.' circle.

'And Ariados started went after them, carrying me on his back.' I think the first part should be rewritten, saying 'And Ariados went after them'.

Good chapter! I wonder how Darkrai is going to fit in with the rest of Cara's Pokemon, or what he's going to do. See you next chapter.

Its good he's going to be better. You better play Black soon! I'm not a fan of the graphics myself but it takes some getting used to. I'm still getting used to it.

Wow din't expect thatAAAAAAHHHHHHHG