| Reviews for I Am Your Son |
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   my 2 guys chapter 2 . 10/14/2018 that was good keep the chapters coming |
| cntcenut5 chapter 2 . 9/17/2015 Uh uh,,,, I like your idea but, why you dont completed it? |
| Immortalis Cruor Elf chapter 2 . 6/26/2012 update soooooooooon! |
| catsanddrpepper chapter 1 . 4/21/2012 This is pretty awesome. I don't understand why I kind of want Minato to just stand there at his funeral, then just... fall forewords onto his face without trying to break his fall, and mumble into the ground, "I'm too old for this shit..." Dont know why, just do. |
| catsanddrpepper chapter 1 . 4/21/2012 This is pretty awesome. I don't understand why I kind of want Minato to just stand there at his funeral, then just... fall forewords onto his face without trying to break his fall, and mumble into the ground, "I'm too old for this shit..." Dont know why, just do. |
| dimensiontimetraveler chapter 2 . 12/25/2011 so.. hikaru's naruto? shinji is the person who found him? |
| MissDEEinsanelyME chapter 2 . 7/7/2010 pretty good glad u decided to continue these story |
| InactiveAccountMay27th chapter 2 . 7/6/2010 Awesome story! Keep it up and update soon! |
| InARealPickle chapter 1 . 7/6/2010 There are a couple of problems with the plot. First, Minato is the world's greatest seal master. He wouldn't simply suppress the cursed seal, he would remove it completely from Sasuke. There's simply no way Minato would allow Sasuke to run around loose when he had a seal poisoning his mind. Second, even if Naruto didn't have the Hiraishin seal on him, Minato could have still used one of his special kunai to significantly speed up his travel. And once he found Naruto, there was nothing stopping him from using a seal placed in Konoha to transport them back to the village in an instant. So really, Naruto's death should never have happened. - Also, you fell into the whole "everyone hates Naruto" cliche. Even if the civilian villagers did, there's no way the shinobi or the clans would hate or ignore Minato's child. - But I think the biggest problem you face with this story is your own inability to write coherently in English. Your painful sentence structures and incredibly bad grammar make it obvious that English is not your first language. You're barely fluent. Obviously you could manage in the language if you had to, but it would be painful for anyone to have a conversation with you. I could barely stand to read what you took the time to think about and typed. |
| Evil E. Evil chapter 1 . 7/5/2010 wow |
| theadventurer chapter 2 . 7/4/2010 they are going to meet soon yes naruto and the hokage |
| yuchan chapter 2 . 7/4/2010 hikaru? good name. XD hemm... nice chapter! plz update asap! :) |
| quintupledots915 chapter 2 . 7/4/2010 Awesome story! |
| geetac chapter 2 . 7/4/2010 I like the chapter. |
| kawaiiemichan chapter 2 . 7/4/2010 OMG! you gotta continue updating this story! XD |
