Reviews for Astrid Struck
alex chapter 9 . 2/11/2013
u need more of a story still good though i felt it was a little short
4ever2010 chapter 9 . 7/9/2010
rlly cool story, but i do have a few questions like:

1. What happened to Toothless?

2. What happened to HIccup?

3. Are the dragons still banished from Berk even after the Monstrous Nightmare queen dragon thing died?
4ever2010 chapter 4 . 7/9/2010
omg the ending was a huge cliffhanger! great chapter dude!
4ever2010 chapter 3 . 7/9/2010
haha nice ending i love it!
4ever2010 chapter 2 . 7/9/2010
nice chapter very well written awesome job! cant wait to read the rest of the story!
Toothless-the-nightfury chapter 8 . 6/12/2010
update soon please!
vatchel chapter 7 . 6/4/2010
its great keep going till the end
thehuman13 chapter 7 . 6/4/2010
This is becoming really good! Can't wait until the next two chapters! Too bad it's almost over...

update soon!

-human
vatchel chapter 7 . 6/4/2010
great keep going till the end
iwelcomeWishes chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
ah-dorable keep up with the great writing!
Zac and Artemis chapter 5 . 5/25/2010
Aww, man, I knew it would be Astrid...I love the phsycological stuff you always do in your stories, making us question stuff.

P.S. My Internet connection still sucks...:(

Cy
asdqwezxcasdqwe chapter 5 . 5/24/2010
Dear Cornys,

Well, so far this has been...interesting. It's not bad. It's just, as you have said, rushed. Take a little more time for each chapter and things will often just work themselves out.

Might want to take another look at the first-person scene though. A big mistake there. I won't quote it, because it is obvious, but I hope you catch it.

Good luck and best wishes,

MattGGJones
Bengal 24 chapter 5 . 5/23/2010
Nice work.. didn't seem rushed anyhow.
The Man chapter 5 . 5/23/2010
Wow, that was unexpected!
Bengal 24 chapter 4 . 5/23/2010
Nice chapter, cuz.
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