| Reviews for Astrid Struck |
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alex chapter 9 . 2/11/2013 u need more of a story still good though i felt it was a little short |
4ever2010 chapter 9 . 7/9/2010 rlly cool story, but i do have a few questions like: 1. What happened to Toothless? 2. What happened to HIccup? 3. Are the dragons still banished from Berk even after the Monstrous Nightmare queen dragon thing died? |
4ever2010 chapter 4 . 7/9/2010 omg the ending was a huge cliffhanger! great chapter dude! |
4ever2010 chapter 3 . 7/9/2010 haha nice ending i love it! |
4ever2010 chapter 2 . 7/9/2010 nice chapter very well written awesome job! cant wait to read the rest of the story! |
Toothless-the-nightfury chapter 8 . 6/12/2010 update soon please! |
vatchel chapter 7 . 6/4/2010 its great keep going till the end |
thehuman13 chapter 7 . 6/4/2010 This is becoming really good! Can't wait until the next two chapters! Too bad it's almost over... update soon! -human |
vatchel chapter 7 . 6/4/2010 great keep going till the end |
iwelcomeWishes chapter 1 . 6/1/2010 ah-dorable keep up with the great writing! |
Zac and Artemis chapter 5 . 5/25/2010 Aww, man, I knew it would be Astrid...I love the phsycological stuff you always do in your stories, making us question stuff. P.S. My Internet connection still sucks...:( Cy |
asdqwezxcasdqwe chapter 5 . 5/24/2010 Dear Cornys, Well, so far this has been...interesting. It's not bad. It's just, as you have said, rushed. Take a little more time for each chapter and things will often just work themselves out. Might want to take another look at the first-person scene though. A big mistake there. I won't quote it, because it is obvious, but I hope you catch it. Good luck and best wishes, MattGGJones |
Bengal 24 chapter 5 . 5/23/2010 Nice work.. didn't seem rushed anyhow. |
The Man chapter 5 . 5/23/2010 Wow, that was unexpected! |
Bengal 24 chapter 4 . 5/23/2010 Nice chapter, cuz. |