I like your style. You think you're reading something ordinary and simple, but that's only an illusion.

I like how you revealed the issues lurking between these two with so little words.

And I especially love your ending. The four-word sentence really closed this piece off very effectively. :)

Thanks for a good read.

Wow, this was awesome! I love the walking on ice thing and the imagery and parallelism to their lives-this whole thing was just written so powerfully! But my favorite line: "I just kissed the biggest girl ever." Lol. I love that they were so casual about the whole thing! This was a really great read!

~Teefarino

Ahhhhh, this is lovely and heartbreaking. D: YOU TWO BOYS.

Wow...I love it. That was just...great. Nice work :D

Peace Out! _

I loved this little one shot! It was hot, dark, and sweet. May I ask if you will write a slash for the two? I'd love you forever!

Beautiful hidden meanings, altogether well worth the read! Definitely a favourite.

-SJT