I don't really like stories with too many OCs, but everytging else was grear! :3

All throughout this story are tense lapses. So many lapses between present tense and past tense...I would be okay with the constant changse in first-person/third-person if you just fixed that bit of grammar. Make it all past-tense, and I swear it'll make a big difference.

When talking about occurances that happen in the past, while in past-tense, include the word 'had'. Ex: "Ichigo had watched his mother ride out onto the course, even with all his protests."

Yes, I am the grammar police! *shows you a spiffy badge* Be happy I left you off with a warning! *tires sqeal as I ride off in my flashy grammar-cop-car*

haha poor ichi

Thanks to Grimmjow Ichi can now sleep in peace somewhat I guess. As for Luppi please someone smack his femme lookin ass LOL

This one is going in my favorites and so are you!

Really good story. i love it

Isn't that a weak reaction for someone who has been raped and someone whose boyfriend has been raped? If i heard my lover has been raped i'll f*cking plot evil ploys to kill him.. And based on previous chapters, grimm is one hell of a possessive person.. So i'm kinda confuse... -.- (yeah, i hate rape fics, so i'm gonna drop this fic...)

It's amazing as I'm a horse lover even though I haven't rode a horse for nearly 4 years as I quit after the instructors did show favouritism to one rider while the rest of us looked like piffy on a rock. The story has earned it's spot in my faves and I look forward for a similar one like this.

I loved this, as I stated before. I would have wanted to finish this a few days ago, but, internet decided to die on me for two days. Not a very nice gesture, if I may say so.

I want a continuation. I wanna see Ichi ride competitive again, show other people his scar, be a teacher, I wanna see him do loads of stuff!

Wolf, you did not dissapoint! better than christmas, yeah!

I can't wait any longer! I have to get this of my chest.
You. Are. My. GOD!
A mxm story thaat have both Bleach with my favorite pairing and the story is about horseback-riding, something that I love? *Takes a deep breath* IT CAN'T GET ANY BETTER THAN THAT! *huff*
This story and you are getting place on my favorite list!

Sorry, but I'm gonna have to finish reading this now, this had a higher priority in my head than my christmas gifts (although I had to take a break from reading between 13.30 and 21.00 cuz I was away to celebrate with the rest of the family), do you understand how wierd that sounds? more important than Christmas! It can't get any better than that! Gah

I love this. Seriously, when I saw the words, "'The Islander' by Nightwish" I literally froze. That song is my favorite song by Nightwish. And when you mentioned Whiskey Lullaby, I laughed out of pure happiness. Finally, someone who knows these songs and likes them! Seriously though, you are awesome.

Oh man! You finished before I could even review! It took me fooooorever to find this story after I lost it once. I had been about halfway when the file holdin this story disappeared. Oh well, pasts past.

First off let me start by congratulating you for completing this, I absolutely LOVED it! Tho it was hard at times to see the normally Espada characters as human, I still loved this story. I loved the drama and fluff in this, the angst and humor, and of course smut!

Second, let me also give you a virtual glomp for finishing this awesome story!

Grimmy was such an oblivious dummy at times that it was so cuuuuuute!

And now with this story finished, I can't review the chapters anymore... (If a story is finished before reviewin, I don't comment until the last chapter)

Thanks for righting this amazing fic!

I loved this story! It's so creative and different from the others on FF! You are an awesome writer!

Very nice story! i like it, its different from others. instead of making Luppi in love and obsessed with Grimmjow, you kind of make him lean towards Ichigo. and in a few stories ive read, Aizen is always after Ichigo, or related to ichigo in some way. but you make him go after Grimm, and related to grimm. hehe i like the change. Great job!

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