this was AMAZING. The writing was mind-blowing, well enough to be a novel.

holy shit, this story was so good!

awesome chapter

I feel rather sorry for Uther because earlier he allowed his distrust of magic root so deep inside him that presently he's completely blind from it.

this is so well written.

lovely :D

You did a good job with this story. I now see why people call your stories dark and foreboding. Overall good work. I am mildly surprised with all this talk of dragons you never brought Kilgharrah into the story. In my humble opinion, he is one of the most underutilized characters in this series. The possibilities he brings to a story are endless.

Wow! I'm not sure whether to be relieved that the tension is over, or sad that the story is! That was great! Fabulous job!

Wow... that was REALLY good. How so much of that happened just because of one mistake... wow, you're really creative XD

nice

This was an absolutely fabulous fic. I was captivated from the very first word and I'm truly sad that it's ended. Such a thrilling ride you've taken us on. Thank you!

What an amazing story! My goodness, I just spent all day reading it - I just couldn't stop. You wrote an incredibly detailed and rich story. You are very talented, and I thank you. This is definitely one of my favorites.

It's like. Woah. You have a real knack for writing stories like these! I especially loved this one :) Think I might go an re-read it again;-D

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Way to go, Merlin! What a clever plan. I especially loved how he made the ritual seem mysterious by mumbling nonsense. ;)

oooh, devious Arthur! i love it! :) i only hope Arthur can get there in time and do whatever it is he is planning to do! lol :) great story so far! i regret to say this is all i have time to read tonight, but i look forward to reading this more tomorrow after track!