Love it :)

Dear 'phfina,

I like this one-shot helper. It may not be as liberated than your other pieces, but Ilike it very much, how you 're helping a friend.

You still manage to leave your mark, but to stay in JT's tone, and I am appreciative of the difficulty of the exercise.

I liked Esme's intervention, the family's women dynamic, Alice and her playfulness. The Rosalie tantrum was very refreshing, and amusing too.

All together a nice, well rounded chapter, sweet but solid.

I like it.

You also know how to be gentle, and a good friend.

C.

wow very nice fic i realy enjoyed reading it and i hope to see more of your work in the future :D

Sweet read. I totally forgot that Bella accidentally flashed Esme. That sequence was hilarious. I was curious as to the reasoning for the name of the story so thanks for clearing that up. (Preface: Don't hurt me.) I haven't nor do I plan on reading the books so everything that I've learned about this fandom's characters and universe came from book and movie promo gleans so I wouldn't have connected the two.

hmmm, when I read this chapter in Rose Read, I knew I recognized the style, and that was why I didn't click onto it being a ghost written chapter xP and it was enjoyable, but as you say no one writes Rose Read quite like JT does. And let me say no one writes like you either.

And I had wondered who JT would trust to ghost write for her, and I suppose I shouldn't be too surprised it was you...

Hold up: You prefer Alien 3 over Alien Resurrection? But...but...there's so much Ripley/Call subtext! I like that one. It owns. But I like them all, because I'm a geek. To further my geekiness, I love Starship Troopers, lol. And Angus Dei reminded me of AvP, so there's no hope.

I liked this chapter. I really did. It stands so well on its own, that I'm glad you published it again. It's worthy of praise, rather than comparison, you know? I really liked the banter between Rosalie and everyone. She's adorable, in her angry ways.

Thank you :D

LOVED this chapter XD it was SO humorous! And yep; definitely seen psycho; thanks to my vid. production teacher. And then poor Bella when Esme walks in...that's embarrassing XD But the idea with Charlie... :( Cue laughing at this quote: "Do you think Esme would find me if I hid in the brook outside? Water masks scent, right?"...hmm that's kind of like me when I have to do presentations on a certain period at school; I ask my friends if they could find an assassin to kill me :) Yeah...I know, a little too much..maybe even overkill but I REALLY despise doing oral presentations. I kind of find Rosalie's 'chiding' really..sweet/cute XD Great fanfic XD Wait...it said this was a request for a repost...so you DID take down stories? *shrugs* Oh well, I am glad you reposted it then XD

AHHH, I thought it was you who did the Ghost after I read it! But JT said not to go looking for the author so I didn't ask! It was a good chapter in my opinion but I do like your style of writing (used in BaR and OFT) better than third POV. But thats just me.