Love it! :)

That was amazing! Loved it!

Oh. My. God. And you wrote this just to get out of studying? :O Holy cow you must be the best author ever if you actually wrote this BEAUTIFUL and AMAZING one-shot, especially for such a beautiful couple like NejiTen, so quickly. This is complete and utter perfection. I love the lyrics you incorporated. I love how well you kept Neji and Tenten so IC. I love the beauty of this. I loved everything about this, really. Seynee, you are officially my most favorite author EVER because you have true writing skills and I've honestly never read an author's writing that could actually compete with yours. This… this was just beautiful and it left me speechless.

Please, write more. You are such an amazing writer. :)

Emotional and moving story, good on neji for not abandoning tenten

NejiTenten makes me flail.

That was a really good story

Always love this.

this is so pretty. leave alone the canon story, this is so pretty and beautiful and I wish I can paste it with glitter on my wall. :")

HOLY SHEEP THIS FANFIC HAS GOT ME BAWLING IN TEARS. Amazing word choice for a beautifully crafted story. The emotion is just leaping off the screen and the characters are so perfect it's sublime. One of the best NejiTen fanfics ever. Awesome awesome job!

very good

Fucking beautiful.

that was realy good

Your writing just captures my heart so easily. Such a beautiful piece, it's one of the best I've ever read. Please write more! Love your writing so much!

Love it! Very pretty :)

Keep writing!

~M.I.

This was breathtakingly beautiful. I love your writing style, and the fact that you had this in an alternate universe (I'm a sucker for those AU stories...) only added to the drama. I love it. Thank you so, so much for writing it. The interactions between Neji and Tenten were beautiful, and I loved the idea behind it. It was so unique... I mean, who else would have thought of having Orochimaru ruling the Hyuga clan, ordering Neji around as his subordinate? I'll tell you who: no one, because you're amazing and you thought of it. You are so... I can't even describe how I feel about your writing. I'm squealing, Seynee, squealing. Thank you so much for this.

As for your inquisition about our connections with the quote mentioned in the authors note, I'm afraid I have to say no, I have never felt like that. Of course, I'm only fifteen and love is still a bit of a foreign concept for me, so I don't mind. Love will come with time, as it did for Neji and Tenten in your fabulous story :) Now, I shoot the question back at you: Have you ever felt like that? Considering the emotion packed into this fic, I would be willing to guess that you have, but I digress...

However, I do have one complaint, and I think it has to do more with my inability than anything else. Between the conversations and Neji and Tenten, I wasn't sure what the original plan from Orochimaru was. At first, I thought that he was ordered to murder Tenten, considering the mention of the whole Neji-in-king's-room scene; more specifically, the aftermath of that scene. However, when you mentioned the bit of Orochimaru seeing Tenten as not being a threat to his throne, everything went downhill for me. Why would Orochimaru want to kill Tenten if he didn't see her as a “threat”? I understand that, to legally secede to the throne, he had to make sure all heirs were taken out... but why would he even worry about it if Tenten wasn't a threat to his position? It didn't make sense to me.

Then again, I've never been the most intuitive person, and I also tend to miss out on key details of a story. It could be just me... Regardless, thank you for writing it. Despite my rather unintelligent confusion, I found it very amusing. It was an amazing story written by an amazing author with an amazing style. It was beautiful; thank you so much for giving me the opportunity to read it :D

Yours truly,

Wroathe