Reviews for Vows III: Honour
Novembertopaz chapter 17 . 10/29/2019
I'm largely confused about Harry's patronus. Wasn't it a panther in the last story?
Ducky1776 chapter 7 . 8/8/2019
I know this is been set in stone for a while, but wasn't Bill at the World Cup so Harry met him there?
lawshark chapter 17 . 2/26/2019
Isn’t his patronus a panther in your AU? When did it turn (back) into a stag? I would fix that continuity issue. Great set of stories - absolutely loving them even if the thought of upcoming Snape and Narcissa is not appealing :) Snily all the way!
TheGoldenTrioFan chapter 23 . 9/22/2018
One of my favourite retellings of the Goblet of Fire. Well done.
TheGoldenTrioFan chapter 13 . 9/21/2018
Narcissa and Severus... that is my cup of COFFEE!
Guest chapter 20 . 8/29/2018
I hope the snake and the wand weren't in the bonfire.
Guest chapter 18 . 8/29/2018
Good action/drama chapter!
Guest chapter 17 . 8/29/2018
Response to Moody: Of course, you dumb shit.
Response to author: It took you too long to write this and you've forgotten some of your earlier parts of the story. It's easy to ignore/overlook some of them, but Harry's Patronus was a panther all the way up till this chapter, when it is a stag, like in the books and movies.
Question: I know Animagus folk can transform with their clothes, wands, etc., but Polyjuice is such a different process that I wonder how the crotch and legs of Harry's pants disappeared, but yet he was able to keep his wand and wrist holster and wristwatch. Must be magic.
Megisaduck chapter 1 . 12/16/2017
HUEHUEHUEHUEHUE...
Narcissa and Severus sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G! First comes love, then comes the baby in the golden carriage (probably literally)
Navyangel85 chapter 1 . 8/22/2017
What is dumbly up to I do wonder coo coo old man
sjrodgers23 chapter 22 . 5/24/2017
loved this part of the story. now on to courage thank you
sjrodgers23 chapter 10 . 5/23/2017
Loved it thank you
Navyangel85 chapter 13 . 4/17/2017
loved it!
Yvonne Park chapter 22 . 1/20/2016
Great story, once again! I really enjoyed reading it. The changes you made to the plot were very interesting. I was quite confused at the beginning when Moody turned out not to be an imposter, but you handled it very well. Great job! :)

-Yvonne
Fenris Jin chapter 22 . 10/3/2015
Well that was pretty fun. XD

I like the idea the Severus organized his own Order. I wonder what they would call it. Still DA just to spite Dumbledore in case they are discovered? XD

Sorry for my Patronus rant, though it's not a flame. I had meant it to be constructive. :)

The story was good while it lasted. :)
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