Delicious fic! Nicely written.

Damn, so sexy

I'm a huge fan of this pairing, and I just... this was...gah. I loved this. Could you maybe, possibly continue it?

Three month as Obi-wans padawan, and then running away after kissing and staying loyal to The Count seems to me a bit weird. I do like your style and obvious talent very much.

Please make this into another one-shot or longer story! You could go off soo amazingly!

I'm a Ventress/Durge (which you also wrote some things on) person, but this is very good. You're great at capturing personalities.

This is hot, I'll give you that, but I don't think this is quite Kenobi. He comes off more like Anakin to me. Kenobi is more gentlemanly, more mindful of protocol, even in romance. That is who he is, not just his Jedi self. Just that the Jedi self brings it out more. Not to say I don't think he can be incredibly loving and sexy, but not in this way. So I couldn't quite buy this characterization. Ventress was done pretty well, though, I think.

I think I've started shipping Obi-Wan/Ventress after this. *goes to read it again*

This is so good that I have to re-read it all over again! *D

Keep it up!

Lovely, absolutly lovely. To be honest Obi Wan and Ventress reminds me of Romeo and Juliet. They love each other but their families/sides are at war with each other so the love birds cant be together. Truly touching work

ok, I know I reveiwed this already. But I've read it again. and again. and again. That's how good it is. It takes a reeeally good fic to make people read it as many times as I've read this. every word, every phrase is so well written. the plot, the thoughts, the kissing, it's all so well described and so in place, if you know what I mean. This has won my lil mini award of "Best oneshot. ever." very VERY well done, excellent, and I hope you'll be writing more Obisajj soon!

I really liked this one, it sounds like something that might actually happen, it's an actual Obi-wan/Asajj romance, and the thoughts and speech are very well written. I only have one negative to say: I don't understand you're use of italics. But I definatly like the emotions, how Asajj tries to fight her feelings.

THIS WAS AWESOME! Lol. This is one of my fav couples, so whn I saw this, I had to take a peak.. Awesome job! I like the romantic tension in this story... I'd love to see a sequel or a series come from this. Kudos! Hope to see more!

Wow, this one is also great!

The honorable Jedi-Master seduces a 'former' Sith assassin:D

A bit strange, but that just increases the effect!

Very nice, thanks for posting!

Kinda hard to imagine Obi-Wan so...so...seducing. It was good, but odd. Ventress keeps going up and down in her emtions. Amusing, really. Nice job!