Reviews for Never Play with Fire |
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GymnasticsRules101 chapter 9 . 3/15/2014 This is cute. and sweet. |
Guest chapter 2 . 12/14/2012 This is a great story. But you might want to pay more attention to dialogue rules (like a capital letter after first quotation mark) and your grammar (capitals, again). But I repeat, this is a great story. You just need to revise the grammar and some rules. :D |
Koriiiandr chapter 9 . 11/27/2012 YES IT WAS SHPRT BUT A GOOD CHAPTER - kills Julia on '' accident '' Me: oops |
Koriiiandr chapter 8 . 11/27/2012 Aww, she said MY wally... - sees wally - Me: hey wally... Wally: uh... Hey. Me: if you get bored of kuki... I'm always available - winks and blows kiss.. - |
Koriiiandr chapter 7 . 11/27/2012 Yay wally and kuki kissed... Now lets find Julia... Julia? - puts a mask on and makes hair all frizzy and gets a flame thrower - - sees Julia talking to Hoagie - HEY THAT'S ABBY'S BOY! Abby: wha? Me: uh nothing... |
Koriiiandr chapter 6 . 11/27/2012 lol, I know what a power shot is... Lol... Nasty... Anyways.. ILL FUCKING KILL YOU JULIA! YOU COME NEAR WALLY OR KUKI AND I WILL BITE YOUR FREAKING HEAD OFF! |
Koriiiandr chapter 5 . 11/27/2012 Wow... I really hate all those three girls really badly... :D |
Koriiiandr chapter 4 . 11/27/2012 Too bad she didn't hear him say "I love you" |
Koriiiandr chapter 3 . 11/27/2012 Lol, it takes you that long to notice you love someone since the day you've met them... Wow... Wally... |
Koriiiandr chapter 2 . 11/27/2012 Kuki got burned! |
Koriiiandr chapter 1 . 11/27/2012 Come on now, we all know that she also meant he is sect hot - blows kiss and winks - |
ceiral chapter 9 . 5/31/2011 . I like the part when Wally was burning Julia.. Hahaha! It's really funny! Take That Julia! Poor Numbuh 1, he was the one on his sector that doesn't have a girlfriend, oh well.. I love this story so much I relates to this story you know? When Julia was torturing Kuki and..Whoops off topic.. Keep up the good work okay? -With Love, O_O Rachel362 |
ceiral chapter 8 . 5/31/2011 .. So that's why Emma was Brunette at her 1st scene.. I thought that the red-haired Emma was different from Brunette Emma. I love how you write the different side of Emma, I like those kind of stories, when a character have different sides.. Love this chapter! O_O Rachel362 |
ceiral chapter 7 . 5/31/2011 Wally and Kuki sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G! And what was the cool blue flame for? Better keep reading and stop blabbing! O_O Rachel362 |
ceiral chapter 6 . 5/31/2011 One thing to say to Julia...*shouts* this isn't over yet Julia! I promise! . .yet! *hands turned into fire*... Whoa... I am really going on with the story! Keep up the great work! O_O Rachel362 |