Reviews for Never Play with Fire
GymnasticsRules101 chapter 9 . 3/15/2014
This is cute. and sweet.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/14/2012
This is a great story. But you might want to pay more attention to dialogue rules (like a capital letter after first quotation mark) and your grammar (capitals, again). But I repeat, this is a great story. You just need to revise the grammar and some rules. :D
Koriiiandr chapter 9 . 11/27/2012
YES IT WAS SHPRT BUT A GOOD CHAPTER

- kills Julia on '' accident ''
Me: oops
Koriiiandr chapter 8 . 11/27/2012
Aww, she said MY wally...

- sees wally -

Me: hey wally...

Wally: uh... Hey.

Me: if you get bored of kuki... I'm always available - winks and blows kiss.. -
Koriiiandr chapter 7 . 11/27/2012
Yay wally and kuki kissed...
Now lets find Julia...

Julia?
- puts a mask on and makes hair all frizzy and gets a flame thrower -
- sees Julia talking to Hoagie -
HEY THAT'S ABBY'S BOY!

Abby: wha?

Me: uh nothing...
Koriiiandr chapter 6 . 11/27/2012
lol, I know what a power shot is... Lol... Nasty...

Anyways..

ILL FUCKING KILL YOU JULIA! YOU COME NEAR WALLY OR KUKI AND I WILL BITE YOUR FREAKING HEAD OFF!
Koriiiandr chapter 5 . 11/27/2012
Wow... I really hate all those three girls really badly... :D
Koriiiandr chapter 4 . 11/27/2012
Too bad she didn't hear him say "I love you"
Koriiiandr chapter 3 . 11/27/2012
Lol, it takes you that long to notice you love someone since the day you've met them... Wow... Wally...
Koriiiandr chapter 2 . 11/27/2012
Kuki got burned!
Koriiiandr chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
Come on now, we all know that she also meant he is sect hot
- blows kiss and winks -
ceiral chapter 9 . 5/31/2011
. I like the part when Wally was burning Julia.. Hahaha! It's really funny! Take That Julia! Poor Numbuh 1, he was the one on his sector that doesn't have a girlfriend, oh well.. I love this story so much I relates to this story you know? When Julia was torturing Kuki and..Whoops off topic.. Keep up the good work okay?

-With Love,

O_O Rachel362
ceiral chapter 8 . 5/31/2011
.. So that's why Emma was Brunette at her 1st scene.. I thought that the red-haired Emma was different from Brunette Emma. I love how you write the different side of Emma, I like those kind of stories, when a character have different sides.. Love this chapter!

O_O Rachel362
ceiral chapter 7 . 5/31/2011
Wally and Kuki sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G! And what was the cool blue flame for? Better keep reading and stop blabbing!

O_O Rachel362
ceiral chapter 6 . 5/31/2011
One thing to say to Julia...*shouts* this isn't over yet Julia! I promise! . .yet! *hands turned into fire*... Whoa... I am really going on with the story! Keep up the great work!

O_O Rachel362
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