France is so accurately portrayed! I really dislkike how many fangirls call him a pervert and a rapist. like seriously, everyone except north Italy is a perv to some degree, even Germany. Although I think of Germany more as the suppressed perv who's into like hardcore bdsm type stuff but acts prim and proper. Back to France, I feel it's like a previous reviewer said, France is just in love with love. I could totally see him being like if they aren't going to Fuck others they may as well Fuck each other, otherwise it's a waste. I like how both England and America were both just beating around the bush until America is just like screw the bush and hacks it off with a chainsaw. Weird analogy I know, I'm sorry. I blame America. This was well written and hot smut! *clears throat and blushes then mumbles* that was quite enjoyable *more throat clearing* ANYWAYS you did a good job! And I hope you come back to a few (meaning all) of your abandoned stories like new horizons! Keep writing!

Oh my god your characterization of France is perfect3

Well then...*Nosebleed* I feel bad for France though XD

Omg first I'm gonna to tell you that you are a amazing writer
Second I love this story so much it's so funny and romantic!
Okay France would do something like this because he loves LOVE ! Anyways finally they Confessed there love to each other it just took the king of Lamour to help them!
Anyways once again this is a great story and keep posting more fics hopefully Usuk ( it's my favourite pairing) you can probley tell anyways bye

-Ally

Oh dear Lord! It was so thoughtful of Francis to take up such a pivotal role in mending...rather ahem ahem...strengthening the relationship between Al & Artie:-D but Woe to this world! His luck himself conspired against the poor guy! I'm sure the culprits esp. Artie was immensely satisfied with his revenge:-D lol! Ds fic is a masterpiece! The plot was sooo awesum!...even the characterization was amazing! YOU ROCK,pal! Thanks for ds!

kawaii! w

That. Was. Awesome. Simply awesome. They are sooo fricken cute together! /

It's funny cause I can see France totally pulling something like that. xD

GOOD JOB! *thumnbs up*

haha that was awesome. France getting jumped never fails to make me laugh.

Nice one! XD This is an absolutely original idea. Private islands are the bomb.

Aww, this was so cute! I really enjoyed it! Especially France's plan...

Heheh, I hope you don't mind, but I kind of skipped the erm, part in the sleeping bag. That goes to show you hope much I hate intense AmericaxEngland. I mean, it's cute, but when it goes THERE, it's gone too far. Haha.

-grins- I like the plot of this story! It's really clever. I love the end of it! It's brilliant, really. I don't feel bad for France one bit.

Great job on this! I've had enough AmericaxEngland for tonight (yes, reading one or two stories with this pairing makes me fed up with it for a few days). But at least the fanfiction containing the pairing is awesome!

-cough-FRANCEPANTS-cough-

I try to read this outloud, with accents, and when I get to the part with England "squeeing like a pre-pubescent girl", I just turn away from the screen for 4 minutes saying, "I-I can't do it! It's too-... And no one's here! Can't do it!" I'm amazed at how much clear cursing is in this fanfiction, and yet I still enjoy it. It's beautiful, really. XD And another thing about, well, I guess your writing in general since that's what I seem to be drifting into, is your firm format on everyone's characters. You have a specific kind of French-speaking France, a specific amount of tsundere in England, and a certain type of lingo and childishness/hero-ness in America. And you present them to the reader, exactly what you believe what'd happen under certain situations, with exactly the way you think of them. *throws hand up* Love it.

Anyway~ You got perfect French, I love America's nicknames for France and the Canada bashing (as saddened as France became after that) was random but probably some sort of inside, other-story-you-wrote joke, right? Another thing that I was really impressed with was your ability to have England lick America's fingers, and while America takes it very playfully at first, he suddenly ends up lunging at him and kissing him because it was all an act of calm - it's been that way for decades too I bet he'd add. The suddenness of that can't be pulled off by many, so...yeah. ~ I was thoroughly surprised and chuckling to myself. Also "and the love is all around them" sentence was so PERFECTLY placed I just want to hug the five paragraphs before it! XD France's manipulation of America's superhuman strength was also a smirking maneuver as well, and I didn't even THINK of what was in the bag until England asked (not to mention France's slick move away from America onto the boat while the Anglophones chased each other deep into the island)! XD

I'm sure I spotted like...one spelling or grammatical error in here, but I COULDN'T STOP. Sorry. ;

*romantic sigh* Your writing is the ultimate fanservice to the ordinary Hetalia fans and readers in general so please continue to be the great and famous Shatterdoll we all know and love! :D

Sincerely,

~TMRomance

Payback's a bitch, Francis ;)

I love it it's positively delicious :)

hahahaha! that was brilliant! France never expected them to turn on him like that. and poor arthur wanting a shower but not being able to have one. *pouts for arthur*

Goddamn it - I love you and your schemes, France! 3 xD
Oh England, you little tsundere...:'D

you are the only one that can get me to read anything other than RussiaAmerica, I swear! this was quite cute though and I loved the little nicknames Alfred gave France XD