i love that so hot, really hot and cute

i love this first chapter that cute and as you say pervy

i love that so hot, i love them

i love this part, that so sweet and calm

Oh my oh my ... I love it （）
Hmmm dos than mean i am a Pervert OMG !Σ（・・；）
... It doesnt matter, Great Story both of you,(ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

Awwwww This was sooo adorable ! I loved this 3 I couldn't find any like this so I'm happy you made one and it's just PERFECT !

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... YUM! nuff said

this is soooo adorable

when i first so this i was like O.O but then i was like that was kind of hot i must be a freak lol cause he's little boy and the other a grown man this was a first for me. and the only other incest i every read with brothers was supernatural with dean and sam and my inner girl is just screaming inside lol but it was great and i enjoyed it so keep up the good work

never mind

i will definatly admit i never saw this coming. For a minute there, i though Jiro would attack poor Kotaro. I mena you summary said yaoi, incest and shota so one would expect more. either way, i like this so far and im going to read more

I liked the first part so im not going to review it but this part was very disturbing! it was well writting but disturbing... isnt Kotaru like eight? eeek! disturbing...

MY face through the whole thing was like :0

I've never concidered them doing no no things together but it was pretty awesome! Both chpaters...

awesome job loved it and i hope you keep up the awesome work.