I like it.

Nice!

Cute

Zelda and Link again, the timeless romance. only this time it will be happening in the pokemon mystery world so interesting.

The only thing i can give you advice on is when she wakes up, she acts as if she has been an eevee before. Remember, she has long ears, a tail (didn't have that as a human) and walks on four legs. It can be awkward to try to move at first due to the sudden change, also i didn't hear one thing about her tail.

She even doesn't try to deny when they refer to her as "THis eevee" wouldn't you argue if someone mistook you for another species.

aside from that, i can tell this story is going to be great, i hope it is not unfinished, your last update was forever ago, if you are still here then tell me, you haven't updated in over six months.

please tell me you are still here.

Yup. That was a serious ass kicking. Excellent story. Unlike most authors' stories, very few (if any) gramatical errors. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Stupid thugs. Oh well, that's what they're there for, to make other people look awesome. I wonder who this bisharp is. Nice chappy soul.

the bonds of family are stronger than any chain

Hey, I never expected that to happen! Ash showed up! This is getting so interesting! Zapdos has a history, Ash decides to pop up out of no-where, and now, there are more than one human-turned-Pokemon. I can't wait to see what'll happen next! Nice chapter.

Hey, Hey! Awesome update! I really liked this chapter, especially at the end! Stupid Zapdos, never underestmate the main character! Nice job, Soul!

Watch the birdie! *Zapdos Defeated by Zelda*

His chapter's a bit different than what I remember, but still good.

I love it dearest!

The bird is overreacting

That was one weird mission

ROFL

It's the invasion of the worms!