Cieszę się że Sarah uświadomiła sobie miłość i zaakceptowała to w sobie.

Magnificent! Rich, grand of compass, complete in perfection.

I loved this story! Great characterizations. Compelling plot. Wonderful imagery.

Loved it

SWOON! :'D perfect x

Hey, Author-chan! I LOVED the first chapter of The Red Thread! One thing that I noticed, however, was that when Sarah was talking about the Goblin King taking away a few of her hours, she said "went" instead of "when. Other than that, though, I found this part of the story to be very engaging. :D

Oh, thank goodness.

I was going to be very grumpy with you if there wasn't a happy ending. Everything about this was brilliant, I can't find anything lacking. I guess if someone demanded concrit at gunpoint I would say that it could have used a little bit more humor. The few places where you did use humor were very good (the dead standing in line as if to go on a ride in Disneyland, OMG LOL) and I think you underutilized an obvious talent.

Adding to my favorites.

Wow! I was not expecting that! Very well done.

Wonderful story!

I love the Red Thread it was a great motif! I have found all of your labyrinth stories engaging! Thank you for writing!

Perfect! I love it! I'm glad it ends well.

What a beautiful story! I LOVED it! And I'm so happy you didn't make it a tragedy! Thank you!

Oh my goodness! I couldn't keep the tears from falling! I'm so relieved she made the deal! Lovely imagery!

Yeah, happy ending. I've been reading a lot of fics with sad ending and I was so afraid this was going to end bad and it was going to kill me but it was great and I loved it! Thanks :)

I loved this fic! I really appreciate how you wrote Jareth and Sarah. Both in character, very believable, and how I would imagine them 13 years later. I also really enjoyed your descriptions of Death and the underworld. Wonderful plot, imagination, use of existing tales, dialogue and descriptiveness.