Okay...I've stumbled upon one of your fics and read it... satisfied, I started looking for your other fics, and I must say, your writing has improved since your first fic :) good job...there are sill grammatical errors but it can be easily overlooked...

now about the fic...I expected Hibari's answer(when Tsuna asked what he'll do if he were to disappear one day) to be cold and blunt (because that's what makes Hibari, Hibari) but wow, just wow, the way you wrote Hibari's reply pricked my heart... I mean I expected and I know him to be someone aloof but knowing this didn't prevent me from sobbing...great job!

Cute and sweet!

I Have one word to say in this fanfic...:

KAWAII!

xDDDD

ohh this one had 9 reviews...i guess i wasnt intruding? perhaps..

nice fic~

awwww...It's soo cute...and Hibari confessed best part ever!

Awww thtz soo kawaii..especially when Hibari -cough confess xD

EPI. ANJRIT. GILA. KEREN.

anyway knapa baru gue baca skarang ya ..

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gue langsung batuk" pas baca bagian akhirnya HUHUHU GILA hampir nangis gue yang pas si hibari ditinggal berdua sama tsuna itu AwA

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gue langsung GUBRAAKK pas hibari nikahin tsuna. Itu. Knapa. Gue. Ngakak. Okeh. Fenfiklu sedih" tapi berhasil bikin gue ngakak. Ganbatte ne~

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oia boleh rikues kagak? :3

OMG man that was AWSOME!

I nearly cried at the end, that was just so sweet, I could so imagine that being a music vid on youtube. (sigh) the awsomeness of it all...

This story was sooo cute! thanks for the upload!

I really really love it! SO CUTE!~

:D I really liked it. I enjoyed the little epilogue at the end. :)

I was really thrown off by your fluctuating tenses.

Love Love Zura! Any particular reason for the 6-12 pm though? Oh and who were the others in the room with Tsuna besides Nana, Iemitsu, Gokudera, and Yamamoto? It said 7...Kyoko, Haru, and Chrome maybe? Oh well, I'm off to read the last of your birthday fics! These are tons of fun. Thanks for uploading as always!

~Tangerine