| Reviews for Baby, You Can't Drive My Car |
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Guest chapter 2 . 10/5/2019 Aw, no more? |
jessec12 chapter 2 . 6/4/2013 Please update soon; I loved it! I love T7S fics that show the gang is still all together and their kids are growing up together as cousins. Hope you write more of them. :-) |
Mystery Girl 911 chapter 2 . 3/5/2013 Loved it all! I can really picture this. Can't wait to read about Kelso's driving lesson! |
Tafty chapter 2 . 10/27/2012 Ok, I have a few things to say (don't worry, they're all good!) 1. I love the pairings. Fez/Laurie was a twist I didn't see coming, but it works really well. I always pulled for Brooke/Kelso (it's the right thing for him to do.) 2. Fez and Kelso competing for the worst driving experience. LMFAO 3. Red teaching them all to drive. Priceless. Just a suggestion: if there was a chapter explaining how he got roped into teaching everyone. I mean, Eric, Laurie and Hyde are a given, but how did he get to teaching with Jackie. Perhaps with a bit of Kitty interaction to bring the whole group in? 4. So in character! I love that they would all be playing Jenga in 1995! (A bit of a hitch, however... How old is Red? Just saying. To be fair, it is Red and he probably is just as... Spry? Is that the word? Sounds too light for Red, but I'll run with it. He is probably just as spry as usual.) 5. Write more. Please? It is so good and it really defines the characters. Tafty Bird |
MistyMountainHop chapter 2 . 6/9/2011 "No." the foreign man replied in a serious tone, "it was not that bad. It was horrible with a capital HOR!" LMAO Fez continued to glare, "No! he hated me more. I'm foreign!" "I'm a Kelso!" Kelso shouted out. LMAO again. Laurie furrowed her brow at her ex-boyfriend, "Kelso I dumped you. And you didn't break anything of mine except my window when you threw that stupid rock at it." LMAO X3. "Whatever gets you through the pain." he replied smugly, That is *so* Kelso. This is a Vista Cruiser. A car. Not a horse, a donkey, a vine, a cart being pulled by goats, or any other dumbass thing your people drive." "A vine" - LMAO LMAO "I see Kelso, Eric, and Hyde." he said while smiling back at his friends. LOL "You don't cross your legs when you're driving. You're a man, you don't cross you legs like that ever! "But you said to!" Fez argued, "You said to put my left foot on the right pedal and my right foot on the left pedal." "No I didn't" "Yes you did." Aww, I don't know who to feel worse for - Fez or Red! *lol* "That was the day I knew you would be the one to give my dad a heart attack." Eric shared with the group. Hyde nodded, "He is the chosen one." Oh, gosh! LMAO Red nodded, "Not half bad." "So I did half good?" Fez asked I like that Fez asks this in response. D "I'm putting on the radio." Kelso answered. "Put on Zeppelin." a voice called from the back. Hyde would totally demand "Zeppelin" even after he tricked Kelso into unbuckling so Kelso could put on the Beatles... A very small, subtle but spot-on characterization moment, Prissy! "Stop it all of you! If you do not stop I will turn this car into the closest building and kill us all." LMAO! Fez would so say that. Ooh, I hope you eventually continue with this story, Prissy. It's very funny. And I want to see Kelso, Hyde, and Eric's experiences driving with Red. *lol* |
MistyMountainHop chapter 1 . 6/9/2011 "You're telling them to grow up, Forman?" he asked Eric nodded, "Yeah." "And now you're just going to get a popsicle—a kids' snack—from your mommy's freezer?" Hyde asked him. "Yeah, so?" Eric frowned, now feeling confused. Hyde smirked, "Get me one too." LOL Love that exchange. Adorable. "We'll not too old because I'm the youngest here and so I'll be the last one to be old." LOL Totally Jackie. "Kelso finally gonna get some payback for fooling around with all those girls in high school." Hyde commented with a smirk. LOL again. Eric raised up his index finger, "Let's not forget, 'Awesome!'" he added raising up his thumbs, clearly making fun of his friend. LOL X3 "She's a Kelso!" Her husband said for her, his arms up in the air to help make his point. Yes! LMAO "I mean I know she's got part of Brooke in her too," Kelso went on, "but there's still Kelso blood in her and I don't wanna take that chance." LMAO "I don't wanna take that chance." Classic Kelso. Jackie frowned slightly, wondering if her friend was serious, "Me?" she pointed at herself for a second or two before waving her hand, "Please I'd rather [lose] Steven." Ouch! "What do I say?" he asked in his thick angry, foreign accent, "I say, you sonofabitch! I am fourth? Me? Your best friend? I am your fourth choice?" I can understand Fez being insulted. "And whenever Fez's drives me somewhere," Laurie continued for Fez, "we pretend I'm a rich lady and Fez is foreign limo driver." Fez nodded, "Yes, and sometimes it ends with us doing it in the car." he paused for a second or two as his audience displayed looks of disgust, "Ok, all the time." LMAO and kinda eww. D "No." Eric shook his head, "He liked seeing us cry." LOL I could so hear Eric saying that. "Well why not?" his mother asked as she took a seat beside him, "Once Laurie knows how to drive, the two of you can go out and do all sorts of brother and sister things. You could go to the mall, or to a movie, or Oo you two could do some volunteer hours at church." "Um…"Eric struggled for the right way to tell his mom that that would never, ever, ever, ever happen, "Sure, Mom." That's definitely an exchange that could've happened between Kitty and Eric. "Kitty," Red began to say as he walked over to Laurie, "your daughter…" LOL "Is a natural!" he finished happily and then placed his arm around his little girl's shoulder. So so so Laurie-lovin' Red! "Wow." Donna said, "Suddenly I'm relieved that you don't drive anymore." LOL Ooh, I wanna know the other T7S characters' experience learning how to drive with Red. D |
sfbxfcb chapter 2 . 2/15/2011 Wonderful! |
ESLgirl chapter 2 . 5/29/2010 I'm impressed. You write so well for these characters that it's like this could be another episode. |
heartlessromantic667 chapter 2 . 5/27/2010 Yay! I was so glad to see you updated this story :) This was a great chapter, and I loved the Zeppelin/Beatles deal haha. And the 'two and ten' and the "Look behind and tell me what you see," "I see Kelso, Eric, and Hyde." That part made me laugh, and I could totally picture all of this happening! Great job, and can't wait for more. |
Bunny1 chapter 2 . 5/27/2010 It's adorable!:) |
Marla's Lost chapter 2 . 5/27/2010 Loved all of Red's nicknames for Fez, won't list them all because that would spoil it for those who haven't read the story yet. Fez's First Day of Driving. Part one. Starring the magnificent Fez-that's me. Grumpy old Red. And the three stooges in the backseat ** That was a great way to launch Fez's driving adventure. Then we find out there's a part two - it was a great in-depth Red Forman/Fez relationship story. I think my favorite part was the fight over what to play on the radio and Fez's threat that went with it. Great job! |
heartlessromantic667 chapter 1 . 5/19/2010 I think you should continue this one! I'd love to hear all about their driving experiences haha. Hopefully you'll update this one soon lol. It's great so far ] |
MxAcid chapter 1 . 5/9/2010 Another new story? Awesome! I can't wait to see what happens, I'm pretty sure it's bound to be as great as your other stories. I see Red being a good driving teacher, but only to Jackie and Laurie. XD |
Bunny1 chapter 1 . 5/7/2010 It's adorable so far:) Yes, more:) |
HydeLuver chapter 1 . 5/6/2010 Good start. can't wait for the other's driving experiences with Red :) |