oh man, poor elena, though I would never consider her THAT ocd. very nice though.

Good job on Damon, he was just a little bit creepy, which is how I like him!

lol! that was cool. i'd never really noticed before but looking back on it, has elena's room ever bee messy? Thanks for opening my eyes to her OCD! Or 'CDO'! (OCD in alphabetical order!)

loved the story... this certainly explains why it generally looks like the gilberts either have a maid or ocd. in this case, a bit of both

Great one-shot! I love the way you map out the changes in her personality that Damon engenders...and yet you don't bring him in until the very end. Nicely done-please keep writing.

this was adorable! please write some more!

Wow, this was great!
Am I the first review? Awesome!
Anyways, this had everything that a one-shot should have: an opening statement, development, and then a humorous/romantic/dramatic/etc closing that references to the opening statement again. I laughed the majority of the time, and thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
Kudos!