I miss this story :(
Updaatttteeee please
Even is just one chapter :v

Its a great story

its a great story.. keep it up, looking forward for the appearance of freedom and destiny..

nice story

I like it! **

This chapter was really good! It got nice little fight scenes, explanations to bring the story forward, and the best thing was you had Shinn's sarcastic remarks all in the right places, and Kira to hold his temper down. Both of the twins were somewhat protective of each other, each in their own way.

It's really nice reading a fic where Shinn received his long overdue treatment as a main character and you did it well without Kira overshadowing him, while Kira was with him no less! I hope to see more of Athrun and Stella in action, as well as the twins' teamwork in later chapters.

It was a nice chapter, I like Shinn's entrance into the fight... So the sixth G-weapon was the Impulse itself! The serial number fooled me a little, made me wonder what kind of gundam you had in store for Shinn. But of course it's to be expected since you had Earth Forces developing it.

Not to be a jerk or nitpicking, but I hope you'll be a little careful with the full stops and commas before or in between a dialogue, for examples, (the ones in parentheses are my suggestion):

Murrue promptly faints falling on top of Kira."Oh so its okay for you to get in my way?" he asks jokingly...

Shinn wolf whistles."Kira(,)" he drawls(,) "I didn't know..."

The idea of Kira and Shinn being twins were awesome! I used to wonder previously what would happen in GS & GSD if Shinn was Kira's long lost twin instead of Cagalli, since they somehow looked alike. Kudos to you for making it a reality! :)

I really like how you nailed their characters perfectly. And both of them being computer genius were simply relevant to the plot!

Wow this is a good idea. The story, itself is very good as well. I hope you continue to update this story.

Not Bad,could have been more balanced.

I hope You do not making the Planets perfect,it have flaws too,they did not Need to put N-jammer every where on Earth ever neutral countries,they have other options then stealing the EA,s moblie suits,they could have just exposed it,and just Blockaded the colony.

No Bodies ever think about these stuff.

I got idea for you.

People always used the same reasons Blue Cosmic are Anti-Coordinators Racists,Why can someone come up with more Original reasons to Hate the Planets/Coordinators,like the Gene Altering that turn someone into a Coordinators,also Guarantee the Sexual orientation to be Straignt,ther children also have a higher chance to be the same,only 2% of the 2nd Generation have a chance of being Gay or Bi and are not Like in the Planets.

If someone in Real life have the tech to Detect and changed the Gay Gene into a Straignt one,Gay People would be very Mad!

You can use it,in you Next Gundam Seed,s story.

well, just drop by to look whether if you have update or not and to tell you that i now have an account in FF XD (an account that i made solely for the purpose of reviewing and alerting story X3

anyway, hope you will update this story soon XD still looking forward to this story and i will wait forever if i have to XD

but please update as soon as possible coz the waiting is slowly killing me XD

oh damn.. i'm so super duper extremely late on revewing this chapter.. i'm so sorry. i don't know you have update this story last month.. it has been a while since i read Gundam Seed fanfiction.. TT. well, enough of my babbling and on with the review XP

First of all, i want to say thank you so much! why is it so much? well.. you figure out yourself XP kidding, kidding. well, first i'm so happy you reply to my review (well, you reply to everyone's actually. but i'm happy nonetheless XD)

second, i really admire your way of thinking about pairing and plot, and i look forward for ShinnXStellar X3

i also totally agree about no KiraXCagalli!

third, your fic is totally awesome! your humour are getting better and i see more humour than the last chapter (which is really good anyway) i totally love this chapter because both of it's humour, plot, and it's action which pretty much sums up to awesomeness! and i really laugh out loud and many part of this chapter. but i mostly can't stop laughing at 'i doubt their going to change it to Unobtrusive no matter how much you think it matches my personality' , 'I kid you not, and later on Shinn would ask incredulously if there was a Beam Frisbee, a Beam Baseball, or even a Beam tennis racket.' and 'the BBD as Shinn would christen it much to Kira's annoyance'. lol. i really can't stop laughing, you know. and i just really love how you make Kira and Shinn funny and close to each other as siblings, but still keeping them in character. lol.

anyway, looking forward to your next update. hope it will be soon XD keep up the great work X3

Excellent work, but I also fear that there is a power difference now because of Shinn and Stella being in the equation, if you want you can borrow two of my OCs to fight for ZAFT since the "Chasing the Archangel" part of the series takes up for most of the first series. If you want we can speak more later.

Hey, I really have no problem with Athrun/Kira...I just happen to prefer K/L and A/C, but each writer has their own ideas and I'm not going to abandon an interesting story just cause of the pairing- Seriously, the idea of Shinn and Kira being brothers is really cool -

I enjoyed this chapter and find both Kira and Shinn's personalities, very amusing...And Shinn's worship of Mu is classic...Wazuk...Lol, that scene was fantastic.

I'm also curious about Kuzzey. Is he anti-coordinator?

Anyway, great chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one. Good luck and I wish you plenty of inspiration.

wao, this story is just keep getting better... while i'm not really a fan of KiraXAthrun, i cann't resist the urge to read your story. it's so great that i'm sure i will read this through the end as long as no there are no lemon or something heavy like that. i also love your sense of humor XD especially with Kira and Shinn. like when Kira says "it's my head she's currently aiming for" and many more. i laugh real hard that i received strange look frñ my brother and mother. lol. Looking forward to the next chapter