Oh my, this is such a good story! I just adore how cute and awkward their situation were. Not to mention a fantasy-like, heart stopping moment at the last few lines.

Love it!

I'm amazed at the balance you've kept between hilariously akward and really hot. Hopefully Lea got all the virginal inadequacy out of his system before Axel came along.

l.o.v.e, its been so long since i've been on Fanfiction, and this is a great way to come back.

nice story, i totally loved the end, and the middle and beginning XD

So, that's how Axel learned all his moves. xD I loved the awkward-ness and how Lea was obviously lying about having sex. lol. It was cute and there were so many amazingly adorable lines they said that made me giggle and smile. :D

Yup. I loooved it.

ohmygod. so awkward.

i can totally see this happening. the joys of pre-sexy axel(:

i loved it.

looool /is totally the one who requested this on the kink meme

it's equally as awkward and lovely rereading this. hnnn

Oh my god that was so awkward i died. I could totally see axel being that much of a noob. Great job tying it together with the game plot at the end.

;_;
I LOVED: "You're hot, I'm hot, we'll have fantastic sex."
"That logic is flawed in so many ways." There were many cute moments as well that actually made me smile while reading... Then that last line- Brilliant.

SO SEXY
damn, pecan, you are pretty much the most talented writer out there! i've only found you recently but i'm so glad i did.
whether it's smut or angst or humor, you do it all so well, and so effortlessly.
i'm deeply humbled.

adventure forth, intrepid writer. i'm excited to see where you go.