Amazing job! I love getting into the mind of Luke and this was perfect! Spot on! I especially loved the end! It makes me sad that he is the villain for the whole series and dies to be the hero... *heavy sigh* Well, anyway, again, great one-shot! Loved it!

~ TheBrightestNight

Ouch.

That was sad.

Very sad.

Yet so awesome.

I loved it a lot.

-Icy-

Whoa...

This is really great! And new! I like the POV. The only thing I thought could be better was if the 'no' at the end was before the ver last sentence. But that's just me!

This was an excellent one-shot. It gives background, and depth to Luke. Love it! Something I noticed, the words 'so' and 'but' are used often. I know that it's supposed to be conversational, but it begins to sound repetitive after a while. Great job!

This was really, really well-written. Luke could have been such an awesome character had he stayed good. I feel so sorry for him now. :(

Well, that was actually pretty good. Didn't expect it to be anything special, but, I must say, I was pleasantly surprised. Excellent job.

*cries* So sad! Luke would have been an awesome person if he didn't become all jerk-like. Great job!