great story! I had been wanting to read since some time now, I'm truly glad of had done it!

Think the ending is a little sad, due to Chico's death u,u but it was necessary and Rico was very brave :)

I'll read third part now :h

good job!

Loved this story, maybe even more than the first. You do seem to love having last chappies have a higher rating.

For such a serious story, it's very funny. I espepically liked 'oh sweet scientific theory, that explains so much', 'don't let Private or Kowalski within fifty feet of anything that contains cacao or sugar', and 'so you're kind of screwed'.

You are a genius writer.

- Chapter 1: I knew that Rico was going to have an evil brother going into this story, though I didn't expect Dr. Blowhole to be the one pulling his strings. I liked Kowalski's initial reaction to the revelation of Rico's brother: "A twin brother? How is that possible, penguins come from..." I suppose it suggests that Chico was the bad egg in that clutch.

- Chapter 2: I thought that Kowalski's "census of science" was neat, especially with respect to the bologna detector and Jiggles. Props also for the "like taking fish from a chick" line. As for the plot, it has certainly thickened, and I am awaiting finding out just what Chico has planned to do with the items he stole. Having possession of Kowalski's Degausser and mind-switching machine certainly can't be good.

- Chapters 3-4: Following Chico's longwinded rationale for joining the side of evil, this story had very interesting ending. I wasn't sure how Chico would meet his demise, and I wouldn't have predicted that Dr. Blowhole would meet such a fate as well. Rico with his gun pointed at Chico is similar to the last minutes of some movies in which you don't always know if the good guy will off the bad guy on the spot or instead choose to haul him off to prison. Given Rico's situation and his dedication to his non-DNA-linked brothers, he appears to have made the correct decision. I do wonder one thing about Dr. Blowhole, however: Now that he has assumed room temperature, might he be fed to the leopard seal as well?

And now I have read all of the "Flashback Series"!

Well, i loved it a lot! I liked the ending! And finally Blowhole is dead! Yeah, i'm a Blowhole hater. And i loved how you make Rico n Chico, and how they are speaking! Great!

I absolutely love your stories, and this was an awesome ending. I loved the native tongue speech that Rico made at the end. And then the "So your kind of screwed" Put it like that, and NICE. You are probably one of my fave authors

Woo alsome chappie

Very good story! I can't wait for the next flashback series story! Keep it up!

Wow... This was great! I don't even know how to describe how...I can't even think of a word. I could just see this happening, it has such great detail. I liked Rico's response to Skipper's question. XD Can't wait for the next in the Flashback series!

Noes u g2 update I love this story :)

I can't take the suspense!plz update soon!

*GASP* Oh my goodness! That's just AWESOME! Pleaze update soon!

There's something about Chico I don't like...

But I love the story... wish it had Katrina...

Exciting story! Very interesting, would be the best way to describe it I think. I loved the thing about Skipper telling him; "Don't let Kowalski or Private within fifty feet of anything containing cacao bean and sugar" That made me laugh out loud, seriously. Anyway, please continue!

hey wheres kowlaski's wife?

AH *clasps hands over mouth* e you've updated! Well, more like wrote again... E I'M SO excited... I love it!