I agree with everything EXCEPT killing Hanabi. Seriously, what the fuck? She was young and, like another reviewer said, could have been re-educated. My other problem is with killing the rest of the main house. Sure, they deserved it, but did he ever think about how that would affect Hinata? Given the state of ninja therapy in Konoha, no one is going to as much as comfort her over losing her ENTIRE FUCKING CLOSE FAMILY, INCLUDING HER YOUNGER SISTER ( who was at the most A MOTHERFUCKING TODDLER.) Would you really make her the clan head after what happened to her family?

Nice fix

This is gold!

AHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHH...

This was... cathartic. Also a bit more realistic, given that Konoha is a military dictatorship.

Alright, that was amazing. I don't normally like fanfics where Naruto is heavily abused, but this just seems to work. I'd pay money to read a full length fanfic of the aftermath.

And that's exactly why a thing like that would have been hardly enacted. While in your timeline Naruto was surely treated worse than canon, remain the simple fact that to redress all the wrong done to him the way you did would have SEVERELY weakened an already non strong enough Konoha.

I'm not saying that the punishment wasn't deserved (though you went honestly too far with Hanabi. The culprit there had been her father, she was the recipient of a manipulation and could have been re-educated) but in a world like the Narutoverse, an already after Kurama's compulsion-based attack weak Konoha could not afford purges of THAT magnitude without becoming target of the vultures constituted by the other hidden villages.

This fic is a cathartic redressing of the wrongs done on Naruto, but with little to almost no adherence at the international socio-political situation of that world.

I have slogged through many horribly written fanfics. This was a pleasent surprise. A real gem! I enjoyed it emensly! Thank you for this.

I liked it!

I love this, though I'm sorry sarutobi lost his leg

No matter how many times you read about the abuses, it always make your blood heated up.
You did a damn good job I say!

This was an intresting idea.

The only two problems I see are that so many people died which would tank the economy and cause the Dynamo to go against Hiruzen. Also as some one else pointed out Hannabi would be too young to know anything maybe 3-4 assuming she is 3-4 years younger than Hinata.

The interpretation of the law is vague here and mass execution does not make sense. Honestly a course for all children on Jinkurik as well as sealing would likely solve part of the problem. Everything else would have been a proper police presence insuring the law was held up from the beginning.

Naruto's childhood was bad but we have no indication that there was active murder attempts by Kohona ninja for him. That parents had children not spend time with him makes sense as historically speaking from what we were shown Jinkurki are normally unstable weapons of mass destruction created by villages. The stable Jinkurki are either unknown or are the trump cards of the enemy. Naruto is the first known Jinkurki of the Kyuubi in their eyes. The fox almost destroyed the village cost them their hero/savior. People being afraid and hating Naruto is understandable even if it is wrong to do.

Naruto is honestly in the awkward position of being one of if not arguably most important military asset, a scapegoat, and living being all at the same time. If any clan made a move to help him then it could be seen as them attempting to gain power for a cu. The same could be said of really any person with power in the government. The only reason the Hokage can get away with it is because is because they need to have that connection to keep Jinkurki under control. If you actually look at the goverments of hidden villages in the series those who gain prestige in the government for a peer generation of the Jinkurki are those close to the Jinkurki.

The biggest issue for Naruto is that he was honestly outed as the Jinkurki after his birth instead of being raised in secret until he could hide his nature.

no matter how piss the 3rd hokage was he wouldnt kill hanbi shes like 1 yo when naruto was six

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This is great! I kinda want to see what happened to Naruto during this time? And maybe one shots of Ibiki interrogation. And maybe a one shot after Tsunade assume the guard duty and some unlucky bastard try to hurt Naruto.