I am in tears...The whole last two 4-5 chapters have touched me...Really touching...Please continue writing...:)

*cry* this is so sad

Ahw... I just don't know what to say! Amazing story!

Not every story can have a happy ending, and the poignancy of this ending is palpable. Thank you for writing.

Even though I am a sucker for happily ever after, I liked this story! The only thing though is that make sure that if you write more stories, you really check for spelling errors cause it can be pretty annoying. Oh, and make sure when deciding to write in past or present tense, you stick to it. But enough with criticizing your work because it really was a good story! I hope you don't take offense to my criticism because I only want to make your writing better then it already is! Keep up the great work!

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Sincerely, Heather D

Ok, you know it's good when it made me tear up! I probably would have cried if my family hadn't been in the same room as me. Good details, love how you switched point of views I find it gives the reader a better idea of the story when the writer does that! Very very good, but it was not very nice to kill off Susan, but still I loved it!

Wow, this is the best Narnia story I have ever read. But it is so tragic!0

LOVED IT!

That was sad, but good.

It's tragic but it's great!Woh! I never image that I would say that I like a story that my beloved Susan dies, but her death is so heroic! Your writing is great and I love the way you describe Susan's fall and Caspians reaction!
I would like to read more of this story, maybe a sequel? or an one shot with Susan and the older Rilian.
Carry on the good work!
Irene90