What happened to Kim?

This was beautifully written. I'm not at all surprised about Renee, I very rarely read her as a supportive mother. I'm glad they got their happy ending. Great job!

Great story.

Love this story can't wait to read more of your stories.

Oh he's good.

I've never felt more connected to a character's confusion and anxiety as I did with Bella these last few chapters lol. Like even as a reader who knows all the fic things, this was a rollercoaster of emotions, I can't wait to get to know Jared along with Bella

This ending felt a little rushed to me but that’s ok. I’m just glad to see that they’re all doing ok, that Jake is happy, that they’re all happy. I really enjoyed this story.

I love the differences in each wolf you’ve shown so far. Jake is an attentive, soft lover. Jared wild but no less attentive. It fits their personalities.

Good for her standing up to Jared’s mom. Perhaps the woman can even take Bella’s words and apply them to herself and love her family fully. I noticed a booboo, you called her husband Jason in the other chapter, in this one he’s Jeremy.

Of course he did, because Aro is an ass. I hope he doesn’t get what he bargained for and regrets his decisions immensely. Because that would make me feel better.

Save his life and he has a change of heart. But yet they don’t have souls? I don’t hunk it was losing her soul that broke the imprint, I think was her becoming his mortal enemy. She died, her heart stopped beating. I can’t even consider for a moment that someone like Esme, Carlisle, Emmett, Jasper...that none of them have souls any longer.

I had hoped it wouldn’t come to this moment but alas. It’s interesting to see how much more he feels for Bella than he did for Kim.

Dear lord man. I get Edward being unable to let go, because he doesn’t know that the bond is essentially unbreakable, though it do wonder if maybe she actually could like she said, but Jake sees inside Jared’s mind all the time, he’s heard Bella tell him that she wants Jared. He just up and made this decision that she would break the imprint without actually considering she wouldn’t? I know he’s a teenager but he can’t be that dense can he? Sheesh

I wonder what Edward heard in Jake’s mind. Probably the bit about marriage

If he isn’t careful, Edward is going to get himself killed. I don’t think his desire to get her back has a thing to do with his love for her either. Now he’s acting obsessed. If Carlisle and Esme don’t get him under control they’re going to lose him and it won’t be anyone’s fault but Edward’s