This was unexpectedly sweet, and I absolutely loved it. I'll be voting!

Oooh, fascinating concept!

OOooOOoOoOOOOOOooooOO! Neato! Write more! pleeease. :) (I'm not usually this demanding..lol)

Wow. This is amazing! I absolutely love, love, love what you've made here. The way you introduced Numair's discovery with the introduction about walls, barriers, etc, was absolutely amazing. It made the ending line so important. Wow. A favourite for sure. You've taken this moment and made such a unique, articulate and moving interpretation. I am very impressed.

KrisEleven~

Nice analogy...I'm sad that it'll only be a one-shot tho.

I'm a sucker for anything involving symbolism and D/N. Nice one :)

Hm ... interesting idea, I think.
So that's why he realised ...