Okay be prepared to hear the truth about your story. It's awful. Down right awful. Gypsy is a MAJORRRRRRRRRR Mary Sue. Like really major! Your grammar is horrible. Everyone is out of character. This story is also highly unrealistic. I'm sorry but it's the truth.

This is really good! I hope you continue it!

This is such a good story! I love sister stories and especially ones where she gets hurt, because they freak. Please update soon. :)

i like your story, great job, please update soon!