God ! I just thought House died...
Nice fanfic! Love it!

tht is so sad that cuddy dies. this is so good i love it so far.

This story was great! I was worried for a second at the end that you'd killed House. Thank goodness I was wrong.

What is your problem? When it cut from the hospital to the cemetary I started freaaaaking out and sobbing and thinking up some sort of an angry rant to leave as a review! And then I read on and felt stupid... Anyway, great story! Obviously you got some strong emotions out of me. (Still kinda crying.) Hahaha. Seriously, though, I loved it a lot and I'm ashamed of all the angry thoughts I had in my mind. Oops. ;)

Okay, the two fics by you that i've read have been good, but that whole 'Wilson and Forman came out looking... Well' at the end of chapter 28, then BAM! Grave yard, it made me cry, I thought House was dead D:

But this was good, prolly one of the best fics I've read on here.

You get a lot more then 6 years for attempted murder, even when plea bargained down to assault with a deadly weapon. I would think especially in a case where someone fires a gun in a crowded court room in front of a judge. I would think this would be one of those cases where they don't offer a plea because of the media that would get out about this case and prosecute to the full extent of the law. You don't want publicity that says people can get away with firing a gun in a courtroom with just a slap on the wrist.

Even with a plea the judge usually has last say in the sentencing and i would think any judge would give him the maximum even if plea bargained down.

Good story and all but...Why did you call it Huntington's Career? I looked it up and it is most def not called that. It's called "Huntington's Disease"

I enjoyed your stories. As you asked for some constructive criticism I will give you a couple of suggestions: 1. Your British colloquialisms and use of the British legal system was a bit distracting. I suggest either being more neutral in your use of language or learn what is the proper Americanisms are.

2. Also you may want to use a beta to aid you in editing.

Keep writing you show great potential!

M

At first I thought House would be dead, and I was nearly crying! Amazing!

good ending :) i can't wait to read "mom"

hey are you going to write a sequel to Dad besides Mom i want to know what is going to happen now . hope u update soon.

You should soooooooooooo have done a worse punishment to Simon. You're so boring XD

I can't tell you if you kept me on the edge of my cage since I always am on the edge of my cage, waiting to wreak havoc once more. MWAHAH- *coughity cough cough cough* ugh, I just swallowed a bug...

Anyway, loved the story!

Oh and I'm kidnapping Simon. BYE!

Simon: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Me: :)

I liked this story and Rachael is a daughter Cuddy would be proud of and she jleft her with the love of her life House knowing with her gone they would need and help each other.

Thank you for sharing :)

This was an amazing story, the court scenes completly kept me on edge, I was almost afraid to read the next chapter for fear out of what would happen. :)