Wow. I normally don't like stories where a main character dies, but this story...Let's just say, I'm crying my eyes out right now. Please promise me, you never ever stop writing cuz you're amazing!

Can't log in from my phone, like I said. Beautifullt writte, and I usually hate stories where a main character dies, especially since she was pregnant, but this was very eloquent.

Aw:'( Poor Olivia:(
I think that was beautifully written.

The sun has dipped below the horizon and the moon has risen. Creatures of the night are calling to each other, and still I sit. My body is frozen in the present, my mind trapped in the past in its attempts to hide from the future. -So beautiful, wow. Very good.

I'd love to tell u how much I love this little story but I'm crying to hard to make out the keyboard...
awesome one-shot!

A beautiful story! I especially liked the line: "My body is frozen in the present, my mind trapped in the past in its attempts to hide from the future." Keep writing SVU fic! :)