This seemed like a really cool story before it was abandoned.

I don't like your trope of having Harry's female friends chew him out for playing a rough game of Quidditch. Women play rough sports, too. We are not weak minded females who don't understand the joy in playing sports. It's misogynistic to continue with the idea that it's perfectly acceptable for girls to make boys feel guilty for playing sports and enjoying it.

Please no frienship with Hermione!

great chapter keep it up

Hi I don’t know how much you know about English education but A-Levels have very similar knowledge requirements as SATS, if he completed them at ten the he would of already done GCSEs and would have done A-levels in the same year as SATS. GCSEs are used to judge competence in subjects you want to take further, ensuring you can cope, while A-levels in England and SATS in America are used by university/college to decide if you can go there (or have an apprenticeship)

tbh hes not mad enough for being lied to his whole life

I don't think I have been up to date with the story often enough to review it in real time. I think my hope for this story is that you continue to give HP realistic challenges. An adult would have a hard time coping with the stressors of having a new house to manage at the same time their career was taking off. Once you add in a full time education, a new business sector for the magical economy, then all the legacy concerns from the Potter and Evans' side; you've built in a mental and emotional breakdown. A team of lawyers, investment bankers, an ongoing health care provider network for sports injuries, and a group of consultants for the potential offshoots would be the very least his enterprises would require. How do you keep everyone honest and ethical?

I am not sure how one person can do that and stay sane.

A terrorist and his biker gang mindlessly cutting down really intelligent people along the way would scar any human being. Dating and coming of age hormonally are not small feats at that stage either.

I like the story, but it gets a little more fantastic and out of this world the more responsible he must become.

Isn't it 11 not 14 when witches and wizards go to Hogwarts? I'm totally confused here.

Love it!

why do you keep saying they are 14?

First of all, I love this story. I like that it is different than most stories I have read in this fandom; Harry is intelligent and noble but still believable. Most stories that involve an intelligent Harry make him the next dark lord. There are a few grammatical errors in the story but I don’t feel they take away from the storyline. My biggest issue with the story is Harry’s age. The author’s note says at the beginning of the story Harry is 14. However, in a few chapters (20 is the last one I read) you state that he is 13 just before his third year. He should be 16 going into his third year if the story started when he was 14 so I am confused. Please don’t get discouraged or stop updating this! It is amazing! I just can’t get past the age thing because it makes it difficult to determine how mature he SHOULD be.

The score mention for the Gryffindor vs Slytherin game does not make since as I am sure both teams made some goals but its the fact that they snitch is worth 150 points.

Marvelous and awesome

Great story can't wait to read more there is so much going on

I really like this story but you have a fault with Harry's age in chapter 14, he isn't 14 years old he is 11 to 12 years old since the quidditch camp is after his first year so in his first year he was11 and since his birthday is end of July he is still 11 years old in that summer not 14 years old